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读后续写世界著名的芭蕾舞演员
第二节 读后续写(满分 25分)
Once there lived a girl named Melanie. The little girl was living with a dream. She wanted to be a ballet dancer. Her body was extremely flexible and she had a strong will power. Melanie's parents never knew the incredible(难以置信的) skill of dancing their daughter possessed. One day, they saw the little one dancing with the perfect steps and enthusiasm of a ballerina(芭蕾舞女演员).
The following day Melanie accompanied her parents to a local dance training institute. Upon meeting the dance teacher, her parents requested to admit Melanie to the school. The teacher asked Melanie to give an audition(试镜). The little girl was happy and showed some of her favorite dance steps.However the teacher didn't seem interested in her performance. He kept himself busy with other tasks in the dance room while the little girl continued dancing with a hope to impress the teacher.“That's ok. You can leave now! Don't waste your time aspiring(渴望) to be a dancer." the teacher said.
Disappointed,they returned home,as tears rolled down Melanie's cheeks. Her dreams were shattered(破碎的)within a matter of minutes. With crushed confidence and a hurt ego(自尊) Melanie never attempted to dance again.
She completed her studies and went on to become a teacher in school. Life was good and she kept herself busy in family and work. However, whenever she happened to pass through the school's ballet room, memories of childhood days danced before her eyes. She would also remember the harsh words of the ballet trainer who let her down at a very young age.
重点句子分析
Her body was extremely flexible and she had a strong will power. Melanie's parents never knew the incredible(难以置信的) skill of dancing their daughter possessed. One day, they saw the little one dancing with the perfect steps and enthusiasm of a ballerina(芭蕾舞女演员).她的身体非常灵活,意志力很强。梅兰妮的父母从来不知道女儿不可思议的跳舞技巧。有一天,他们看到了小家伙以芭蕾舞女演员的完美步伐和跳舞的热情。
Disappointed, they returned home, as tears rolled down Melanie's cheeks. Her dreams were shattered