内容正文:
如何进行读后续写情节的构思
(收养小狗 改变人生)
学生存在的问题
读中:一头雾水,读不懂,不会提取有效信息
不知道如何挖掘原文中的材料为续写所用
写中:缺少衔接与连贯,续写与原文疏离,
写到哪里算哪里?
Teaching objectives:
To guide the Ss how to determine the new plots and the ending of the continuation writing properly.
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教学思路
一:提取信息要点,摸清主旨内涵
二:探求逻辑关系,梳理思维脉络
三:关注情感走向,形成合理发展
四:力求首尾呼应,确保前后一致
第二节(满分25分) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had ordered many gifts online for the upcoming Christmas. One day, when the doorbell rang, I was sure some of the packages arrived. I opened the door, but only to find a beautiful little dog sitting on, the floor. It looked up at me with her big, cute eyes. I looked around, but there was no one in sight. It was obvious that someone had found the puppy somewhere and intentionally left her outside the door.
The lovely dog was a timely Christmas gift for me, indeed. The year marked a turning point in my life. In September, my husband was offered a new job in Africa. Feeling that? had hit a career bottleneck as a photographer journalist, I decided to relocate with him. While my husband was busy with his work, I didn't know what to do anyway. I felt isolated, homesick and lacking purpose. We lived in a house near a river that cut across an expansive grassland. With few people around, I would take my camera and wander around, photographing aimlessly every day.
So we adopted the abandoned. dog. My husband called her“our little angel”and I named it accordingly. Angel seeme a to be very happy with us and she turned out to be a perfect companion for me. Always by my side, she enjoyed exploring the shady bushes and mysterious tunnels all over the grassland. Encouraged by her curiosity, I decided to explore, too.
There was a deep cave near our house and I had been eager to explore it. The only way in was narrow and slippery. I-had promised my husband that I wouldn't do it unless he was around. But he was always busy. With Angel as my companion. I figured that it was time to stre