读后续写十二天的善意 讲义-2024届高三英语复习写作专项

读后续写十二天的善意 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Twelve Days of Kindness Although it was less than two weeks before Christmas I found it difficult to be in a festive mood. We had moved to Canada, and holidays were difficult for us because we missed our friends and relatives in Minnesota. Our family was also going through a very difficult year, with health problems and a serious work-related problem for my husband. “Mom,How I wish we could spend Christmas with Grandpa and Grandma in Minnesota. I really miss them and my friends there.”said my fifteen-year-old daughter,Rachel. “I know,Rachel. So would I”I said.”But Minnesota is 2,000 kilometers away. Don't you remember how hard it was to drive in that snowstorm last year? And then the temperature dropped to -30℃ on our way back?” “I remember.” she said and ducked her head disappointedly. We thought driving to Minnesota for Christmas was too risky and buying airline tickets for three people was out of the question.We would be spending Christmas alone in Canada, and had no money for a Christmas tree or a Christmas dinner. We were surprised when the doorbell rang. It was dark and cold outside, and we weren’t expecting anyone. Hesitantly, Rachel stood up and went forward to open the door, and then said,”Mom , there's a big box on the doorstep and nobody is out here!”My husband also went and looked. But there was nobody in sight. They brought the box in.We were surprised to find that the box contained many packages covered in bright Christmas paper. Each had a typewritten note:Open Dec.14Open Dec.15...There were a total of twelve-the”Twelve Days of Christmas.”The note read: Our LOVE is given anonymously(匿名地), so enjoy fun with your family,but don’t tell anyone please. 文章简析： 接下来的续写需要注意不要往两个方面去偏，一个是展开对具体礼物的描述，十二份礼物，占据文章的篇幅过大，不利于文章的完整架构。因此建议就是描写代表性的礼物，但是不能是返家的机票，因为前文对于买机票的可能性予以否定，后文内容应结合前文的逻辑进行展开。或者直接模糊礼物内容，下面的范文就是采取的模糊化。另外就是对于送机票的人设计上，有两个方向，一个是陌生人，另外就是亲朋好友，亲朋好友部分容易把内容扩大，前文对于亲朋好友的信息支撑过少，后续需要提供一定的逻辑合理支撑，导致文章的篇幅过大。再者如果假设陌生人会使得