2024届高考英语读后续写八股文写作讲义

读后续写大部分都是围绕 conflict/problem solution 展开。大部分文章的写作模式：八股续写 1、 情绪：凤头 消极情绪 panic panicked panicking envelope envelop笼罩 1. 独立主格Night approaching, the darkness ruled/enveloped the whole forest. Darkness falling/ night approaching, he felt extremely panicked/scared in the lonely wilderness. Night approaching, a burst /wave of scare flooded over him/swept over him. A burst /wave / flood of anger/panic /sorrow=grief /embarrassment /disappointment /guilt /excitement/joy /terror =fear= scare =horror / seizing /consuming/ overwhelming/ flooding over = sweeping over him, he was unable to move an inch, frozen/rooted over there. A handful of sweets a touch of green tea 一抹清茶 a couple of hours a ray of hope一线希望/ sunlight一束阳光 2. It was then that he realized/sensed that he was totally lost, a burst of panic overwhelming him. 3. Unable to contain/hold back his annoyance , he stormed out of his room, slamming the door heavily behind him in anger/angrily. Annoy annoyed Tired and hungry, he was unable to step any further/farther, a burst of terror flooding over him. 4. On hearing the news/ At the news that he failed to win a prize, he felt heartbroken, unable to contain his tears/ sorrow=grief /disappointment. His heart seemed to be torn into pieces 心都要碎了 tear tore torn swear 发誓诅咒swore sworn The moment=instant he heard the news that his puppy was killed in the car accident, his heart seemed to be torn, unable to contain his grief. 5.Confused/puzzled as he was, he followed his brother’s words, opening his coat hesitantly. hesitate Angry as he was, he didn’t lose his temper. Disappointed as he was at the outcome, he didn’t give up his dream. 二、 细节：进一步解释描写 1. It was heartbreaking for her to miss the valuable /precious chance=opportunity. 很伤心Heartbroken She stood there silently, tears streaming / rolling down her cheeks/face. Checks X He stood there silent, his tears swirling / welling up in his eyes. It was heartbreaking for him not to pass the college entrance exa