Unit 4 Topic 1 话题写作特训 学案 2023-2024学年初中英语仁爱科普版八年级上册

Unit 4 Topic 1话题写作特训 【话题解读】 本模块写作话题主要是谈论多种多样的动植物。它们构成了我们美丽的家园。但是一些动植物已经灭绝,很多动植物也面临灭绝的危险。落实到写作上,要能用本单元学到的知识就如何保护动植物编写小短文或就环境保护发出倡议。形容词和副词及它们的比较等级的运用会给短文增加更多的亮点。 【素材积累】 【词汇】 1.sky 2.river 3.clear 4.nature 5.less and less 6.in danger 7.share...with... 8.protect ... from... 【开头句】 1.Plants and animals are important to us.We must protect them. 2.Without plants and animals, there will be no man on Earth. 【中间句】 1.Plants can make the air fresher and cleaner. 2.Plants can keep the beauty of nature. 3.But some people cut trees down for wood. 【结尾句】 1.In a word, we should try our best to protect plants and animals. 2.Now it's time for us to do something for them. 【答案】 1.天空 2.河流 3.清晰的 4.大自然 5.越来越少 6.在危险中 7.与……分享…… 8.保护……免受…… 【范文示例】 众所周知,一些动植物正面临灭绝的危险。作为一名中学生,我们有义不容辞的责任保护动植物。请你以“It's important to protect plants and animals”为题,写一篇80词左右的发言稿,呼吁人们保护动植物。 写作指导 1.根据题干可知,本文的体裁是 。 2.文章应使用第 人称。 3.时态为 。 写作提纲 写作范文 It's important to protect plants and animals ①Hello, everyone! Let me tell you why it's important to protect plants and animals. ②Plants can make the air fresher and cleaner.Animals are our friends.They are an important part of nature.But some plants and animals died out because of people.Men cut down plants for wood, killed animals for their meat, fur and bones.Some plants and animals are in danger of becoming fewer and fewer in number. ③In a word, we can't live without plants and animals.It's important for us to do something to protect them. ①Hello, everyone!拉近与读者的距离,以引出下文。 ②运用make+形容词句式,介绍植物的重要性。再用一些动词短语die out,cut down, 展现动植物的现状,以引起读者保护动植物的共鸣。 ③总结,表达中心思想,对应主题。 【答案】 1.说明文 2.一 3.一般现在时 【触类旁通】 东山(East Hill)过去是个空气清新、风景优美的浓密的森林,不同种类的动植物生活在这里。几年前,人们在这里建造了工厂,之后又建造了一些饭店和超市。好多动植物数量变少,甚至一些动植物趋于灭绝。请你写一篇80词左右的演讲稿,呼吁人们在东山植树。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】 Good morning, everyone. I'm pleased to speak something about East Hill here. East Hill was a beautiful place with fresh and thick green trees.Many kinds of plants and animals lived here.A few years ago, people started to build factories, supermarkets