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写作能力提升练
Unit 4 Growing up
假设你发现Spud Webb 深深影响了你,给你带来了许多动力。请以“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”为题写一篇100 词左右的短文。
相关信息 1. 个头矮小,梦想进入NBA;
2. 一直为梦想而奋斗;
3.1985 年成为NBA 球员
成功原因 ……至少两点
对我的影响 ......
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb.
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步骤 构思 列纲
1 开门见山, 指出 Spud Webb 对我影响最大及相关信息 The person who... is Spud Webb.
He was very small, but he had a big dream...
2 Spud Webb 成功的原因 First ….
Second…
3 对我的影响 His spirit keeps me going...
The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
The person who has influenced me most is Spud Webb. Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963. He was very small, but he had a big dream of playing in the NBA.
He has been fighting for his dream since his childhood. As a saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” In
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1985, he became an NBA player. What led Spud Webb to success? First, he didn’t lose heart even when he was refused to play basketball in the team because of his height. Second, he was able to take every chance.
Spud Webb has influenced me a lot. When I face difficulties in my daily life, his spirit keeps me going and encourages me to take on new challenges.
1. influence
2. spirit
【单词】
1. lose heart
2. because of
3. try out
4. lead to
5. give up
【短语】
1. My father is the person who has influenced me most.
2. My father has always been kind and helpful.
3. Now I realize that he has a heart full of love.
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[2022·黄冈改编]在你的成长历程中,有许多值得感恩的人,如父母,老师,同学……他们或帮助过你,或影响到你,你最想感恩谁?请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文。90 词左右。
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要点提示:
(1)他/ 她有什么特点(外貌,性格……)?
(2)他/ 她对你影响最深的一件事是什么?
(3)你想怎样感谢他/ 她?
参考词汇: be grateful to 对……心存感激;have an influence on 对……有影响;care about 关心;unforgettable 难以忘怀的
The Person I Want to Express My Thanks to
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want