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每年的3月5日是中国青年志愿者服务日,你校英文报正在组织以 “My Volunteering Experience”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.志愿服务的意义;
2. 你的经历;
3. 你的感悟。
文本分析:本文是关于志愿者的意义和感悟。这个已经写得很多了,官方范文写得很漂亮,开头as a powerful way to, volunteering serves非常有气势,开门见山。第二段开头用双重否定句,an example/ experience couldn’t illustrate the point better, 平时会说a case in point is...,最后一句话,such... that, not only, but also连用,文章句型高级,内容丰富。非常漂亮!
做志愿者工作的意义:
1.give back to the community 回馈社会
2.make a positive impact on the lives of others 对他人生活造成积极影响
3.enrich one’s life 丰富某人的生活
4.Learn the importance of compassion, patience, and perseverance 学到同情,耐心,坚持的意义
5.contributes to the betterment of society 有助于社会变得更好
6.reaffirmed one’s belief in the power of collective action相信集体的力量
7.Foster a sense of responsibility and citizenship 培养责任感和公民意识
8.Provide many benefits for young people 为年轻人提供许多好处
9.Develop teamwork skillls, improve communication skills 培养团队合作能力,提高沟通能力
10.Provide a sense of purpose and fulfillment 给他们一种目标感和意义感
11.Unpaid community service 志愿活动
12.Make the community more harmonious and prosperous 让社会更和谐,更繁荣
官方范文:
My Volunteering Experience
As a powerful way to give back to the community and make a positive impact on the lives of others, volunteering serves as an indispensable way to provide individuals with a sense of fulfillment and construct a more supportive society.
My experience of working in a local nursing home can’t illustrate the point better. During the memorable experience, I spent quality time engaging in conversations, assisting with daily tasks, and providing companionship to the elderly. Additionally, we also arranged some interactive activities such as staging singing and dancing performances and make delicate cards with them, easing their loneliness and bringing a sense of warmth. It was incredibly rewarding to see the smiles on their faces and to know that I was making a difference in their lives.
It was such a meaningful experience that not only does it enrich my life but also serves as a reminder of the power of spread