2024届高考英语读后续写高级句式及其仿写练习讲义

对照续写高分句型学案-进行仿写：主语1+谓语，主语2+非谓语 一．独立主格 当出现两个动作，而前后两个动作逻辑主语不一致时，便可使用独立主格（主要动作为谓语动词，次要动作为非谓语动词）。独立主格属于高级语法句，在书面语中可以使表达精准、简洁，是老外在书面表达中最常用的一种句型，非常之地道。 举例：她打开信，她的双手在激动地颤抖着。 这里有两个主语(她、她的双手)和分别两个动作（打开、颤抖），我们将打开作为主要动作（谓语动词），颤抖作为次要动作（非谓语的主动形式）。所以可以仿写为： She opened the letter, her hands trembling with excitement. 翻译练习： 1. 他和爸爸握了握手，两人同时交谈。 He shook hands with his father, both talking at the same time. 2. 随着我的学习被完成，我相信我能达到(live up to)你的期望。 (With) my study completed, I believed I can live up to your expectations. 3. 一个男孩站在门边，双手沾满灰尘。 A boy stood by the door, his hands covered with dirt. 4. 有这么多人帮助她，她迅速地完成了她的工作。 (With) so many people helping her, she quickly finished her work. 5. 他站在那里，感激的泪水在眼眶打转。 He stood there, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. 6. 别挡我的路，”蒂姆大声喊道，他的声音愤怒地在震动着。 “Don't stand in my way” Tim yelled out, his voice quivering with rage. 7. 时钟敲响了十二点，我上床了 The clock striking twelve, I went to bed. 8. 给与更多的时间，我们能按时完成这个工作。 (If) more time given, we can finish the work on time. 仿写练习 1.He cried and his blue eyes was shining behind his glasses. He cried , his blue eyes was shining behind his glasses. 2.I clasped my hands behind me and I was too shocked to say a word. I was too shocked to say a word, my hands clasped behind me. 3.The manager sat quietly in the office and his eyes were closed. The manager sat quietly in the office , his eyes were closed. 4.The boy stood there and his face was rigid with anger. The boy stood there , his face rigid with anger_ 5.As we hugged Ruth good-bye, she said to me, “The day you called, I was still in bed”. Her tears was shining in her eyes. As we hugged Ruth good-bye, she said to me “The day you called, I was still in bed”, tears shining in her eyes. 常见独立主格归纳 tears welling up in sb’s eyes 眼含泪水 tears streaming down sb’s cheeks 眼泪从脸颊流下 eyes glittering with relief /joy/excitement...眼里闪着 eyes filled with anger/annoyance 眼里满含着 face gleaming