27 板块3 专题5 写作技巧探究 七 使用地道英语，避免中式英语-【提分教练】2024年新高考英语二轮总复习讲义（新教材）

七　使用地道英语，避免中式英语 由于语言环境存在差异，中国学生学习英语会受到汉语的影响，一些学生容易按照汉语的思维进行写作，从而出现了大量中式英语。 1．避免词汇层面的中式表达 [典例1]　It's known that the cost in big cities is very expensive． →It's known that the cost in big cities is very high． [典例2]　We walked a far way before planting trees． →We walked a long way before planting trees． [典例3]　My grandfather very likes red tea and has it every day． →My grandfather likes red tea very much and has it every day． [典例4]　He returned back to his hometown after graduation． →He returned to his hometown after graduation． [典例5]　He opened the light after he entered the room． →He turned on the light after he entered the room． [典例6]　My mother agreed me to see the film this evening． →My mother allowed/permitted me to see the film this evening． [典例7]　We lost the game, but we didn't lose our heart． →We lost the game, but we didn't lose heart． [典例8]　Under the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English． →With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English． 2．避免句子层面的中式表达 [典例1]　There will have a meeting tomorrow． →There is going to be/will be a meeting tomorrow． [典例2]　We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time． →It is impossible for us to finish the work in such a short time． [典例3]　There are many students don't support the project． →There are many students who don't support the project． [典例4]　On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun． →On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, which/and bring us a lot of fun． [典例5]　But now because my left foot was injured, so I can't go with you as planned． →But now because my left foot was injured, I can't go with you as planned． [典例6]　Although they tried hard, but they couldn't make her change her mind． →Although they tried hard, they couldn't make her change her mind． [典例7]　While having our dinner, the doorbell rang． →While we were having our dinner, the doorbell rang．/While having our dinner, we heard the doorbell ring． (2022·浙江1月卷)假定你是李华，在“中国—爱尔兰文化节”活动