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五 高级的词汇,复杂的句式
1.高级词汇,摆脱俗套
(1)标新立异
写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
[典例1] (2022·全国甲卷)It was set up to raise public awareness of protecting the oceans, which play an important part in the global ecosystem.
→It was set up to raise public awareness of protecting the oceans, which play a significant/crucial part in the global ecosystem.
[典例2] (2021·全国乙卷)With the wide spread of the Internet, more and more people become online learners.
→With the wide spread of the Internet, an increasing number of people become online learners.
[典例3] His words of encouragement can still be remembered.
→His words of encouragement can still ring in my ears.
(2)短语优先
多使用一些词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文章色彩。
[典例1] (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)I believe that your arrival will be important to our show.
→I hold the firm belief that your arrival will be of great significance to our show.
[典例2] (2022·全国甲卷)We should remember that protecting the oceans is protecting ourselves.
→We should keep in mind that protecting the oceans is protecting ourselves.
[典例3] What's more, we can pour out the troubles we face, and release our pressure from different aspects.
→What's more, we can pour out the troubles we are faced with, and release our pressure from different aspects.
2.句式丰富,彰显文采
(1)以事/物开头,使表达更地道
[典例1] (2021·浙江卷)Yesterday witnessed a traditional Chinese painting exhibition organized by our school.
[典例2] The Lantern Festival is celebrated on the 15th day of the first month of lunar calendar.
(2)定语从句
[典例1] (2023·浙江1月卷)The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.
[典例2] (2021·全国甲卷)To introduce traditional Chinese culture, our school will hold a theme class meeting, which will be exhibited on the English website.
[典例3] No words are strong enough to convey my thanks for your help, without which I could not have made such great progress in English.
(3)名词性从句
[典例1] (2022·全国乙卷)However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is