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写作技巧探究
七 使用地道英语,避免中式英语
板块三 写 作
专题五 应用文写作
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由于语言环境存在差异,中国学生学习英语会受到汉语的影响,一些学生容易按照汉语的思维进行写作,从而出现了大量中式英语。
1.避免词汇层面的中式表达
[典例1] It's known that the cost in big cities is very expensive.
→It's known that the cost in big cities is very high.
[典例2] We walked a far way before planting trees.
→We walked a long way before planting trees.
七 使用地道英语,避免中式英语
[典例3] My grandfather very likes red tea and has it every day.
→My grandfather likes red tea very much and has it every day.
[典例4] He returned back to his hometown after graduation.
→He returned to his hometown after graduation.
[典例5] He opened the light after he entered the room.
→He turned on the light after he entered the room.
七 使用地道英语,避免中式英语
[典例6] My mother agreed me to see the film this evening.
→My mother allowed/permitted me to see the film this evening.
[典例7] We lost the game, but we didn't lose our heart.
→We lost the game, but we didn't lose heart.
[典例8] Under the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.
→With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress in my English.
七 使用地道英语,避免中式英语
2.避免句子层面的中式表达
[典例1] There will have a meeting tomorrow.
→There is going to be/will be a meeting tomorrow.
[典例2] We are impossible to finish the work in such a short time.
→It is impossible for us to finish the work in such a short time.
[典例3] There are many students don't support the project.
→There are many students who don't support the project.
七 使用地道英语,避免中式英语
[典例4] On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, bring us a lot of fun.
→On the other hand, dogs are our best friends, which/and bring us a lot of fun.
[典例5] But now because my left foot was injured, so I can't go with you as planned.
→But now because my left foot was injured, I can't go with you as planned.
七 使用地道英语,避免中式英语
[典例6] Although they tried hard, but they couldn't make her change her mind.
→Although they tried hard, they couldn't make her change her mind.
[典例7] While having our dinner, the doorbell rang.
→While we were having our dinne