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构思
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, there was a little girl who lived in a village near the forest. Whenever she went out, the little girl wore a red riding cloak, so everyone in the village called her Little Red Riding Hood. One morning, Little Red Riding Hood asked her mother if she could go to visit her grandmother as it had been a while since they'd seen each other.
"That's a good idea," her mother said. So they packed a nice basket for Little Red Riding Hood to take to her grandmother. When the basket was ready, the little girl put on her red cloak and kissed her mother goodbye.
“Remember, go straight to Grandma‘s house,” her mother cautioned. “Don’t wander along the way and please don't talk to strangers! The woods are dangerous."
"Don't worry, mommy," said Little Red Riding Hood, "I'll be careful."
But Little Red Riding Hood noticed some lovely flowers in the woods
a woodsman who was chopping logs nearby heard her cry.
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读懂大意,
理清脉络
主要是根据记叙文的六要素弄清文章大意,特别要弄清故事的人物和事件(谁做了什么)。
characters
events
Little Red Riding Hood, her mother, her grandmother,
strangers, woodsman
●Little Red Riding Hood asked her mother if she could go to visit her grandmother .
● Her mother agreed.
● They packed a nice basket.
● The little girl put on her red cloak and kissed her mother goodbye.
● The little girl noticed some lovely flowers in the woods.
● A woodsman heard her cry.
flags
●Don’t wander along the way .
●Don't talk to strangers.
● I'll be careful.
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细读首句,
构思框架
But Little Red Riding Hood noticed some lovely flowers in the woods…………A woodsman who was chopping logs nearby heard her cry
所做
所见
所思
所闻
所感
wander along the way, talk to str