Unit 5　写作能力提升练课件 2023-2024学年人教版英语八年级下册

UNIT 5　What were you doing when the rainstorm came？ UNIT 5　写作能力提升练 　　初中三年，我们都有一些难以忘怀的经历。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“An UnforgettableExperience”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。 1. What was the experience? 2. What have you learned from it?  　要求：　⁠ 1. 词数：不少于80； 2.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥。 ———————————————————————————————————————————————————— ［谋篇布局］理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 ［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。 1.我突然摔倒伤了我的腿。 I suddenly 　fell down　⁠and hurt my leg. 2.她决定帮助我学习。 She 　decided to　⁠help me with my study. 3.当朋友们处于困境时，我们应当帮助他们。 When friends are 　in trouble　⁠， we should help them. fell down decided to in trouble 4.在李华的帮助下，我没有落后于其他学生。 I didn’t fall behind the other students 　with the help　⁠of Li Hua. with the help ［巧妙衔接］用so， soon， from then on等串联事件经过。第三段使用了谚语“a faithful friend is hard tofind(益友难得) ”，深化了主题。 ［连句成篇］ An Unforgettable Experience Looking back on the past three years， everyone has some unforgettable experiences. On a rainy day， I suddenly fell down and hurt my leg. So I had to stay in hospital for over one month. Soon my classmate Li Hua came to see me. She decided to help me with my study. From then on， she came to teach me every weekend. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with the help of Li Hua. I thanked her a lot. Now I know that no matter what happens， a faithful friend is hard to find. When friends are in trouble， we should help them. 上个星期日下午三点，我市突然下起大暴雨，你和朋友们正在做着不同的事情。请你根据下面表格的内容，写一篇不少于80词的短文。 Name Doing Place Julia 看书 城市图书馆 Jim 等公共汽车 在公交站 Tim and Mike 观看动物表演 在动物园里 Peter and I 打电脑游戏 在我家里  　　A heavy rainstorm hit our city at 3：00 p.m. last Sunday. My friends in the city were doing different things at that time. Julia was reading in the city library. She could hear strong winds outside and the rain beat heavily against the windows. Jim was waiting for the bus at the bus stop. He didn’t take an umbrella with him， so he was all wet. Tim and Mike were watching the animal shows in the zoo.  　　A heavy rainstorm hit our city at 3：00 p.m. last Sunday. My friends in the city were