内容正文:
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解
一、介绍信:中医
假定你是李华,你的新西兰好友Lucy打算来中国学习中医,发邮件向你询问中医的有关情况,请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.简要介绍中医;3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词汇80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路:三段论。第一段表示欢迎(要点1);第二段介绍中医(要点2);第三段表达祝愿(要点3)。
【参考范文】
Dear Lucy,
I am more than happy to learn that you are coming to China to study traditional Chinese medicine. Since you ask about Chinese medicine, I will make a brief introduction of it.
With a history of several thousand years, traditional Chinese medicine, also known as TCM, is in line with traditional Chinese culture. TCM has found a place in the world medical history, especially in the years when the COVID-19 is raging throughout the world. Learning TCM, I believe, can not only give you a deeper insight into Chinese traditional culture, but also keep doctors away, killing two birds with one stone.
I wish you a fruitful learning journey. Looking forward to your early arrival. (115 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
【中文翻译】
亲爱的露茜:
听说你打算来中国学习中医,我真的非常开心。你问及中医的有关情况,就让我先给你介绍一下。
中医拥有上千年的历史,与中国传统文化一脉相承。中医在世界医学史上都占有一席之地,尤其实在新冠病毒肆虐的那几年里。我相信,学习中医不仅能让你更加深入地了解中国的传统文化,也可以让你远离疾病,一举两得。
祝你这次学习之旅收获满满。期待你的早日到来。
李华
【参考范文解析】
1.应用文写作前三步骤:
(1)审题判定文体为介绍信;
(2)因两人是朋友关系,故李华身份不必交代;
(3)因文本主体部分为介绍中医,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。
2.本文的亮点:
(1)more than happy非常开心;
(2)known as后置定语;
(3)in line with与...一脉相承;
(4)find a place in在...方面占据一席之地;
(5)rage throughout the world肆虐全球;
(6)I believe用作插入语;
(7)give sb a deeper insight into使某人深刻理解某事;
(8)keep doctors away远离疾病;
(9)killing two birds with one stone一石二鸟,一箭双雕。
二、评论:科技节活动
(台州市2023学年第一学期高二年级期末质量评估试题)
你刚参加了校国际部举办的科技节(Science & Technology Festival), 请在本次活动网页留言板上写一则英文评论,内容包括:1.科技节特点;2.感受与期待。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
写作注意要点
1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路:二段论。第一段写科技节特点(要点1)及感受;第二段表达期待(要点2)。
【参考范文】
The Science and Technology Festival is really fantastic! The drone performance gave students a feast for their eyes, and VR technology provided students with an immersive learning experience. Even more impressive was the brush handwriting with the robotic arm, perfectly combining traditional culture with