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读后续写“四步”写作法
The 4-Step Approach to Continuation Writing
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读后续写的“四步(4steps)”指的是:
1.获取文章大意及记叙文要素(Read for 4W--- )
2.二次阅读获取人物个性、情感变化、文章主题、情节铺垫与悬念(Read For PETS ---- and Foreshadowing)
3.情节预测与构思( )
4.打草与打磨( )
“四步”写作法的内涵
Who, When, Where, What
Personality, Emotion, Theme, Suspense
Predict&Plot
Draft&Polish
A gust of cold wind blasted through the cracks in the half-open door, making me involuntarily shudder. But it bothered me none as I stormed out in a rage, slamming the door shut behind me.
My wife and I got into a bitter quarrel over an issue as small as a sesame seed.I had to leave her alone and try to find an escape in this white world of dancing snowflakes. With the heavy snow coming down, the broad street was almost empty except for a few pedestrians. I wandered aimlessly down the deserted street. My wife and I had been married for years. Though an earthquake had softened our hearts, our tempers were obviously getting worse. As the night darkened, the snow came heavier and faster, the streetlights gave a dim, helpless ray.
It was then and there that I saw a man-powered tricycle. Because the tricycle rider was a man wearing thick clothes covered in thick snow, it was hard for me to see his his face clearly, but the woman sitting behind him was very visible. Under the street lights, her red coat was a sharp contrast against the white snow. Maybe because the road was too slippery or the tricycle was too heavy, the man, bending forward, weighed his body almost entirely over the handlebar as the wheels moved slowly under his pedaling feet.
Suddenly, I saw a hand show up next to each of the man’s ears, and the hands wrapped up the ears tight. Obviously, the hands belonged to the woman. As the slope became steeper, the tricycle slowed down d