内容正文:
随着疫情管控的全面开放,我国出现了一股“报复性旅游”热潮。很多人选择去国内外旅游,体验美景、 美食或不同的文化习俗。 请你根据以下思维导图内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文谈谈你的想法。
The place I want to go to is Yellow Mountain, because it is fantastic to see the beauty of the natural wonders.
If we want to travel, we should choose the right place that can satisfy the need of us to go to. First, we should choose a safe hotel and pay attention to its price. Second, don't forget to know the local weather in advance. Third, why not book the hotel and tickets in advance?
When we are in danger, we should keep calm at first. Then,I suggest we should call the police for help.
In my opinion, the Yellow Mountain is so beautiful. I hope I can have a good time there.
①连贯与句型:首句使用 because 引导原因状语从句; 第二段使用if 引导条件状语从句开头,全段使用 First,Second,Third 进行三方面列举,每个方面使用不同的表建议句型进行造句;第三段先用 When引导时间状语从句,使用 at first 和 then 进行两个时间的先后描述。三段逻辑清晰,使用的连接词和句子各有不同。
②表建议句型的使用:
We should...;
Don't forget to...;
Why not...?
I suggest + 从句(从句中动词用动词原形)
关键加分语言点:
It is fantastic to do .... 做…是极好的
see the beauty of 看见……的美
satisfy the need of 满足…的需要
pay attention to + ving/ sth. 注意(做) 某事
in advance 提前
when we are in danger 当我遇到了危险
in my opinion, 依我之见
我国除了自然奇观外,还有不少人造奇观,例如广州塔。英文杂志 Primeisalwayshandsome 正以我国人造奇观为主题征稿。请你以“人造奇观——广州塔”为题,用英文写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1、广州塔的位置:位于广州市海珠区,离珠江南岸125米;
2、广州塔的特色:600米高,中国第二高;
3、有关时间:2005年 11月25日开始建造; 2010年10月1日向公众开放;
4、号召人们来广州塔玩。
参考词汇: Canton Tower 广州塔 Slim Waist 小蛮腰 the Pearl River 珠江 District 区
名师范文
Now I'd like to introduce something about a man-made wonder—Canton Tower in Guangzhou, China.Canton Tower is famous in China. It is located in Haizhu District, Guangzhou and it is 125 meters away from the south coast of the Pearl River.
There are two reasons why I want to introduce Canton Tower to you. First, it is the second tallest tower in China and it is about 600 meters tall. Besides, it looks like a Slim Waist and it's beautiful.
In terms of the history of Canton Tower, people started to build Canton Tower on November 25th,2005and Canton Tower has opened to public since Oc