Modules 1-7写作复习指导2023-2024学年外研版九年级英语上册

M1 Wonders of the world+M10 Australia 作文复习指导 主题群:人与自我(为主) 子主题:丰富、充实、积极向上的生活,主要国家、主要城市的景观和习俗 无论是“一日观四季,十里不同天”的独库公路,还是他乡街头的赞食,都是这个世界上的美丽风景。“读万卷书不如行万里路”,旅行是我们生活中必不可少的话题。假如你叫李华,你校英语社团将在全校举办一次“爱旅行,爱生活”的英文征文比赛,请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英文投稿。 作文要求: 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 2. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。 3. 语句连贯,词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄在答题卡上。 Love Travel, Love Life By Li Hua Nowadays, more and more people love to travel. 第一步:审清题意定基调 体裁: 书信或电邮( ) 演讲稿( ) 日记( ) 记叙文( ) 说明文( ) 人称: 时态: 内容分分配 第二步:构建提纲建框架 爱旅行,爱生活 写作要点 鲜明观点 核心词句 人们热爱旅行的原因 有机会观景识人品美食,长知识, 开眼界。(一现) provide them with a chance to... increase knowledge broaden horizons 我的一次旅行经历 (地点和活动) 暑期游桂林:游览伏波山和漓江,美景惊艳;品当地美食等; 玩得很开心。(一过) went to Guilin with... during... (拓展一句描述) It's a place with... visited…(仿写书本句式拓展一句feeling) We were surprised at how stunning the view was. tasted the local dishes that are popular among/with... (用定语从句拓展一句描述) enjoyed ourselves(一句话小结) 对我生活和学习的影响 变得独立,学会做计划。(现完) have become more independent have learnt how to make a plan 第三步:句子提升展亮点 【课文复现】 1. In my opinion, man-made wonders are more exciting than natural wonders. 在我看来,人造奇观比自然奇观更加激动人心。(M1) 2. On the first day, we took a plane tour over the rock and I was surprised at how big it was. 第一天,我们乘飞机参观了艾尔斯岩,它如此之大,真让我惊讶。(M10) 1 【内容提升】 1. This is a great place which is really worth visiting, and I will never forget the trip from which I learned about some localcustoms. 这真的是一个值得一游的地方,我不会忘记这次让我学到了一些当地习俗的旅行。 2. As an old saying goes, better to see something once than hear about it a thousand times. 正如一句谚语所说, 耳听为虚,眼见为实。 3. The world is a book and those who don't travel only read one page of it. So what are you waiting for? Let's hit the road! 世界是一本书,而不旅游的人只读了一页。所以,还在等什么? 出发吧! 4. The meaning of travelling lies in the views you see, the people you meet, and above all, the discovery of another "yourself".旅行的意义在于看到的风景、遇到的人,而最重要的是——你会发现另一个自己。 5. Travelling not only increases my knowledge, but also broadens my horizons. That's why I love it. 它不仅增长了我的见识,还开阔了我的眼界。这就是我爱旅行的原