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升级句子动作形成“动作链”
新高考英语读后续写零基础高分教程
1. 谓语动词三连:A、B and C
2. 谓语动词二连:A and B,(非谓语C...)
3. 谓语A, 非谓语 B (and C)
如何形成精彩的“动作链”
概述:在读后续写中,为了写出一个传神的动作,刻画人物的心理状态或行 为反应,可以运用“动作拆解法”,将一个简单的动作分解成2个甚至是3个一连串的细微的动作。一般采用以下几种方法,
4. Doing/Done, 主谓...,doing/done
5. Having done A, 主谓...
6. Seeing/Hearing/Thinking..., 主谓...
如何形成精彩的“动作链”
一 “动作三连”法
提示:用一连串细微动作拆解简单动作。
示例1:他上了出租车。
简单:He jumped into the car.
拆解:“拦车”--“上车”--“说出目的地”
升级:He stopped a taxi, jumped in and told the driver, “Go to the airport, please.”
1. 谓语动词A、B and C
一 “动作三连”法
示例2:(2024年1月浙江卷)她找到了学校的各种设施。
简单:She found the school’s various facilities.
拆解:“利用...穿行”--“找到”--“定位”
升级:She used the shadows to navigate the school hallways, find her classes, and even locate the school's various facilities..
1. 谓语动词A、B and C
一 “动作三连”法
示例3:这位歌手开始唱歌。
简单:The singer began to sing.
拆解:“扫视观众”--“深呼吸”--“开始唱歌”
升级:The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
1. 谓语动词A、B and C
一 “动作三连”法
示例4:Jane挥动她的衬衫。(浙江卷)。
简单:Jane waved her bloouse.
拆解:“站起来”--“喊叫”--“挥动”
升级:Jane stood up, screamed at the top of her lungs and waved her yellow blouse with every bit of her strength.
1. 谓语动词A、B and C
二 “动作二连”法
示例1:(2023年全国I&II卷)我和老师分享了这个消息。
简单:I shared the news with my teacher.
拆解:“开心”--“分享”
升级:I was so happy to hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher.
1. 谓语动词A and B and C)
二 “动作二连”法
示例2:小狗仰躺着。
简单:The dog lay on his back.
拆解:“被困”--“受伤”,--“躺”
升级:The dog was trapped under the stone and injured seriously, lying on his back helplessly.
译文:小狗被压在了石头下面,受了重伤,无助地仰躺着。
2. 谓语动词A and B, (非谓语C...)
示例3:我们坐在篝火旁。
简单:We were talking and laughing.
拆解:“说”--“笑”,--“坐”
升级:Sitting around the campfire, we were talking and laughing.
译文:我们坐在篝火旁边,说说笑笑。
2. 谓语动词A and B, (非谓语C...)
二 “动作二连”法
示例4:(2024年1月浙江卷)她跟着阴影走。
简单:She followed the shadows.
拆解:“深信”--“跟随”,--“惊奇”
升级:She took a