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专题25读后续写之情绪表达高分指导(高兴、悲伤、恐惧)
能吸引阅卷老师的读后续写需要具备连续生动的动作,饱满细腻的情绪,以及适当的心理活动,这样才能让人物栩栩如生起来!才能在众多考卷中脱颖而出!让我们一起来解锁常见情绪的经典表达方法。
目录
1.情绪表达的6种高分方法
2.高兴
3.悲伤
4.恐惧
1.情绪表达的6种高分方法
(1)非谓语动词
① Terrifed by the gunshot , the thief was frozen with fear , rooted to the spot .
小偷吓得僵住了,一动不动。
② She shook all over , feeling like sitting on pins and needles .
她浑身发抖,如坐针毡
(2)with 复合结构
① With butterflies in my stomach, I stood up and began my introduction.
心里七上八下的,我站起来开始我的介绍。
② She cried bitterly, with regretful expression written on her face.
她痛苦地哭着,脸上满是后悔的神情。
(3)强调句型的运用
① Delighted and thrilled , I quickly told him what it was that we want .
又高兴又激动,我很快告诉他我们到底想要什么。
② It was exactly at that moment that I finally realized mother ' s love meant everything.
正是在那个时刻,我才真正意识到妈妈的爱意味着一切。
(4)无灵主语句
① a wide excitement took hold of her .
她兴奋地不能自已。
② a wave of happiness flooded / swept over me .
一股幸福的浪潮涌上我的心头。
(5)独立主格
① Laughter lingering around the room , people ' s faces glittered with joy .
笑声在房间萦绕,人们的脸上都闪烁着快乐。
② Tears welled up in her eyes , and her face crumpled with grief .
她眼泪涌了出来,脸上满是悲伤。
(6)形容词作状语
① Disappointed and frustrated , the poor man made his way back to his family .
满怀失望和沮丧,这个可怜的人回到了他的家。
② Thrilled and overjoyed, Jane quickened pace and sprinted to the helicopter , knowing that she would be rescued eventually . 简欣喜若狂,加快了步伐,向直升机冲去,她知道自己终于获救了。
2.“高兴”高分表达
词汇加油站
1)happy adj .愉快的,高兴的;美满的
2)cheerful adj .快乐的
3)excited adj .兴奋的
4.)joyful adj .欢乐的
5)pleased / delighted adj .欣喜的,高兴的,满意的
6)enjoy vt .喜爱
7)brighten vt .使快活
8) delight n .欢喜,愉快,高兴 vt .使快乐
9) pleasure n .愉快
10)passion n .热情,激情
11)thrilled adj. 激动的,非常兴奋的
12)wild joy 狂喜
13)overjoyed adj. 狂喜的
14)a satisfied look 满意的表情
15)brighten one ' s heart 使某人心情愉快
16)yell with delight 乐得大叫
17)be wild with delight / joy 欣喜若狂
18)be in high spirits 精神高涨
19)be on the top of the world 心满意足,非常幸福
20)a mixture of excitement and happiness 既兴奋又开心
21)wear a shining/broad/big/ bright smile on one’s face 脸上挂着灿烂的笑容
22) a shining/broad/big/ bright sm