读后续写遇险类--凭借直觉走出灌木林讲义-2023届高三英语写作复习专项

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I was a young girl, I used to love going adventuring. My dad always took me down to the bush every weekend and we collected many sticks and stones to add to our collection. I wasn’t like any ordinary girl as 1 loved the outdoors even as a young kid. I was never into dolls and tea parties. Soon I became old enough to venture out on my own. When I ventured forth through the Australian bush land, I felt as if I was in heaven. There was nothing more beautiful than feeling the cool air brushing across my back. The leaves crushed beneath my feet at every step. I felt as if I was home. As the sun dipped down beyond the horizon, there was nothing more to do than to head back home.On my way I heard a screeching(尖叫声). It was the most horrible sound I had ever heard in my life.Sure enough, I just had to investigate. In the dead of night, I headed towards the screech and came across a lake or river of some sort. Looking up and down the river, I couldn’t find a way to cross it. In much shame I decided to give up. It was about one o’clock in the morning and I thought my dad must be getting worried. As I moved away from the lake, there was only one problem that I did not remember which direction I came from. My brain told me left but my instinct(直觉) told me right. In my past experiences I had always gone with my instinct. So of course I went with my instinct. As I walked off into the distance, I could see the sun breaking out in my distant view. 注意： l.续写词数应为150 左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. “You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” 【续写思路一】主题上突出主人公在困境中的坚韧与勇气，以及父爱、亲情和自我坚持的重要性。 续写第一段可以描述主人公在荒野行走过程中对于选择正确方向的挣扎，以及在绝望中依然坚持前行的决心。为更好地与第二段首句衔接，可在本段构思一个场景：附近传来的沙沙声让“我”不禁停了下来。“我”的心脏怦怦跳着，紧张地努力透过黑暗想看清楚是什么，“我”不知道那是野兽潜伏在阴影中，还是风在“我”耳边耍花招，“我”屏住呼吸，静待变化。 续写的第二段描述主人公与父亲重逢时的感人一刻，并对主题进行升华。可以承接第一段描写当“我”听到父亲的喊声时，心中涌起了一种无法言喻的喜悦和安心。原来“我”听到的沙沙声是父亲在寻找我时发出来的。本段可通过强调家庭的力量和父爱的重要性，以及主人公从这次经历