内容正文:
新高考方案·专题增分方略英语
应用文】
写作
对对碰(八)
图表类写作S图画类写作
一、“图表类”写作增分指导
[写作题目]
My suggestion is that students should try
(2022·全国乙卷改编)学校英文报正在开展以
multiple ways when learning English so that they
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can find the way which fits them most and
讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,
improve their comprehensive English ability.
内容包括:
1.学习活动状况描述:2.简单评论:
学亮点写法
3.你的建议。
1.学亮丽开头
首段第二句清楚告知调查的目的与调查对象,为
65
502
下文做好了铺垫。
2.学高级表达
8男
12%
(1)使用高级词汇和词块,如:find out the
读英讲书籍听英诗歌曲看英谱电影测览英语学习树站
approaches to,conduct,specifically.account for,
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
respectively,turn out,favor
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
(2)准确运用高级句式,如:定语从句As we can see
2.请按如下格式作答。
from,.·,who choose to read,.,:并列句while
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half of the students..;It作形式主语It turns
There are many things we can do to learn
out that,,;状语从句when it comes to,,
English well.
when learning English,so that they can..:表语
从句My suggestion is that..等。
3.学精彩结尾
尾段作者表明了自己的观点,合情合理,突出了观
点的实用性。
4.学行文逻辑
[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]
首段第二句中in order to find out the approaches
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t0,.,巧妙承接了本文题目和首段第一句,第二
There are many things we can do to learn
句中we conducted a survey among students与第
English well.In order to find out the approaches
二段连贯衔接。第二段中As we can see from
to learning English beyond the classroom,we
the chart,specifically,while,only,respectively
conducted a survey among students.
流畅衔接了图表中的调查数据,最后一句
As we can see from the chart.most
turns out that,,总结上文。尾段作者给出自
students being interviewed,specifically 65%,
己的观点。总之,本文思路清晰明了,图表的表
choose to listen to English songs.while half of
述简洁准确,作者的观点客观实用,全文意义完
the students prefer to watch English movies.
整,逻辑连贯。
Those who choose to read English books and visit
[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]
English learning websites only account for 18%
1,开头部分:描述图表内容
and 12%respectively.It turns out that students
1.The table/chart/graph shows that...
favor the entertaining ways over the traditional
2.According to the survey/table/chart...
ones when it comes to English learning.
3.As is shown in the t