13 专题三 写作对对碰(七) 写人记叙文Vs记事记叙文-【新高考方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题增分方略（新教材）

新高考方案·专题增分方略英语 应用文对对碰（七） 写作 写人记叙文VS记事记叙文 一、“写人记叙文”写作增分指导 [写作题目] 学亮点写法 (2023·全国甲卷政编)你们学校正举办主题为 1.学亮丽开头 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中 作者在本文首段开门见山，直奔主题：引出对自己 国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 最有影响力的历史人物—范仲淹 1.人物简介及事迹； 2.学高级表达 2.意义或启示。 (1)使用高级词汇和词块，如：be widely 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右： 2.请按如下格式作答。 acknowledged,influential,known as,be highly The Historical Figure in China appreciated,made great contributions to,spare no effort等。 (2)准确运用高级句式，如：定语从句that are widely acknowledged,which had a far-reaching ... 倒装句Here are.·,状语从句such,,that he always encourages me,；主语从句What impresses me most..,;非谓语动词短语作宾补 encourages me to be.... 3.学精彩结尾 [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] 结尾巧妙引用大家熟知的范仲淹的人生哲学“先 The Historical Figure in China 天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”来表明该历史人 Among the Chinese historical figures that are 物对自己的人生启示，说服力强，很容易引起读者 widely acknowledged,Fan Zhongyan is the most 的共鸣。 influential in my opinion.Here are the reasons. 4,学行文逻辑 Known as a Chinese writer and politiclan in 本文首段中Here are the reasons,有承上启下的作 the Song Dynasty.Fan Znongyan was highly 用。第二段的首句为本段的主旨概括句，Besides进 appreciated because he made great contributions 一步对范仲淹做出的重大贡献进行列举。尾段第 to society.He spared no effort to carry out a 一句起到承上启下的作用。总之，本文思路严谨， series of reforms to make his country 句与句之间、段落与段落之间合理衔接过渡，全文 prosperous. Besides.he proposed the 连贯流畅，传达意义完整且具有启迪性。 establishment of a national school system,which [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese I,开头部分：引出所要介绍的人物并简要描述 educational system. 1.The person I admire most is...,a famous/great What impresses me most is his famous scientist known as .. philosophy of life:"Be the first to worry about the 2.My role model is....a(n)outstanding/ troubles across the land.the last to enjoy distinguished/talented scientist titled... universal happiness.Fan Zhongyan is such a role 3.Throughout his/her life,...demonstrated incredible model that he always encourages me to be a man courage,which allowed him/her to accomplish of noble character great things. |56 专题三应用文写作 4.On the journey of my growth,there are many 7....is known fo