12 专题三 写作对对碰(六) 新闻报道Vs通知-【新高考方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题增分方略（新教材）

专题三应用文写作 文对对碰（六）新闻报道VS通知 写作 一、“新闻报道”写作增分指导 [写作题目] 学亮点写法 (2023·断江1月高考)上周末你参加了校学生 1.学亮丽开头 会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英 开头运用事实陈述句开门见山报道了上周末的新 文报写篇报道，内容包括： 闻事件，符合新闻报道的文体特征。 1.活动的过程：2.收获与感想。 2.学高级表达 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右： (I)使用高级词汇和词块，如：participate in,begin 2.请按如下格式作答。 with,characteristics and uses of various plant Getting to Know the Plants Around Us species,observe and collect samples of,be struck by,incredible,provide food and shelter for,sing high praise for等。 (2)准确运用高级句式，如：非谓语动词短语作定语 organized by our Students'Union;定语从句who taught us about...that exist...that are used for等，这些也是文章的亮点之处。 3.学精彩结尾 [悟满分作文·厚写作功底】 作者在结尾使用a valuable and enriching experience 来总结“认识我们身边的植物”活动，用sang high Getting to Know the Plants Around Us praise for说明参加者对这次活动评价很高，凸显 Last weekend,I participated in a "Getting to 了本报道的价值。 Know the Plants Around Us"activity organized by 4.学行文逻辑 our Students'Union. 本文第一段总体概括新闻报道事件，吸引读者了 The activity began with a lecture by a local 解详情。第二段描述了活动的过程及作者的收 botanist.who taught us about the different 获，.，began with,.then,,Throughout the characteristics and uses of various plant species. event.·also,·使句与句之间紧密衔接。第三 We then went on a natural walk to observe and 段总结活动反响与意义。 collect samples of different plants.Throughout: 总之，本文写作高度契合新闻报道的要求，段落之 the event,I was struck by the incredible varlety 间层次分明，全文逻辑连贯流畅。 of plants that exist in our world and learned [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] about plants that are used for medical purposes. I,开头部分：简明扼要地介绍报道的核心内容 as well as those that provide food and shelter for 1.In order to encourage the students to take outdoor animais.I also gained a greater appreciation for exercise,our school organized... the role that plants play in maintaining the 2.Last Sunday,some students took part in an balance of our ecosystem. : activity organized by the Students'Union. Overall,It was a valuable and enriching 3.Chen Lei is a senior teacher who takes photos of experience.All the particlpants sang high praise old buildings in this city in order to preserve the for it. city's cultural