09 专题三 写作对对碰(三) 感谢信Vs道歉信-【新高考方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题增分方略（新教材）

新高考方案·专题增分方略英语 应用文对对碰（三）感谢信VS道歉信 写作 一、“感谢信”写作增分指导 [写作题目] (2)准确运用高级句式，如：what引导的宾语从句 (2019·浙江6月高雪)假定你是李华，经常帮 what you have devoted to.,:含蓄虚拟语气 助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。 without your help,I would not have made...and 请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： would not have won,:助动词do表示强调Ido 1.表示感谢：2.回顾Alex对你的帮助： hope that you will have,.,等。这些都为文章增 3.临别祝愿。 色添彩，提升了档次。 注意：1.词数80左右： 3.学精彩结尾 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 结尾用助动词do放在谓语动词hope前特意加强 语气，充分表达了对朋友Alex的美好祝愿。 [悟满分作文·厚写作功底] 4.学行文逻辑 Dear Alex, 首段中的and,主体段中的still,Besides, I'm sorry to hear that you will return to your Actually,All in all,尾段中的and串联起了句与 country very soon and I'm writing to extend my 句之间、段与段之间的衔接过渡，使得全文内容表 sincere gratitude for your warm-hearted help with 达清楚，逻辑合理。 my Engllsh learning. [积写作素材·造吸晴亮点] I still remember what you have devoted to I.开头部分：表达感谢之情并说明原因 improving my oral English and English writing. 1.I am writing this letter to thank you for... Besides,you selflessly shared your learning 2.I am writing to express my sincere thanks for... experience with me.Actually,without your help. 3.I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you I would not have made rapid progress In Engllsh for your selfless help in this letter. and would not have won the recent English 4.On behalf of....I'd like to extend my sincere Speech Contest.All in all.words fail to express gratitude for your selfless help. my thankfulness to you. 5.I'm extremely grateful/thankful to you for your I do hope that you will nave a bright future unselfish assistance during... and that our friendshlp will last forever! Ⅱ.主体部分：对对方给予的帮助以及达到的作用 Yours. 和效果进行有层次的描述和赞扬 Li Hua 1.It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to... 学亮点写法 2.Thank you very much for your kind hospitality 1.学亮丽开头 (好客，热情招待)and the honour you showed me 开头先用I'm sorry to hear that.,点明写信的背 during my visit to... 景及对朋友的不舍之情。接着用extend my 3.It was your kind/unreserved/selfless help that sincere gratitude for your warm-hearted help enabled me to do .. 写信的目的，感情真挚、诚恳，语言自然流畅。 4.Many thanks for all the things you have done in 2.学高级表达