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Section 5 Writing a Narrative Essay about a Festival
考情播报
谋篇思路
介绍节日或记叙节日经历属于记叙文,应突出事情的经过以及人物的感受等重要信息
首段:介绍事件相关的节日的名称和日期
第二段:具体叙述节日前的准备活动和节日的庆祝活动
尾段:简要总结或发表感想
积满分佳句
■ 夺人眼球开头句
1.The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first lunar month.
春节是在农历正月初一。
2.Chinese people usually put up the Spring Festival couplets on the front gates of their houses.
中国人通常在家门口贴春联。
3.Its time to get together with family and friends.
这是和家人、朋友聚在一起的时候。
4.The Spring Festival, also known as Chinese New Year, is the most important holiday in China.
春节,也被称为中国新年,是中国最重要的节日。
5.To the Chinese people it is as important as Christmas to people in the West.
对中国人来说,它就像圣诞节对西方人一样重要。
■ 亮点出彩篇中句
1.People start buying presents, decoration materials, food and clothing.
人们开始购买礼物、装饰材料、食物和衣服。
2.Besides, before Chinese New Year, Chinese houses are cleaned from top to bottom.
此外,在新年之前,中国的房子要从上到下打扫干净。
3.During the festival, the main color is red, which means happiness and richness.
在节日期间,主要的颜色是红色,这意味着幸福和富足。
练写作规范
某英文报社正在举行一次主题为“节日经历”的写作比赛,请你写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:
1.中国的春节从农历新年开始,持续十五天;
2.提前打扫房子、购物、贴春联等;
3.全家人都穿着新衣服聚在一起享受着美食和家庭的温馨。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
第一步:认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁
人称
时态
要点结构
首段
阐述节日名称和日期
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
第二段
节日准备和节日庆祝活动
尾段
说明节日感受
第二步:斟词酌句 靓化表达
1.我们度过了一个难忘的春节。
We had an unforgettable Spring Festival.
2.中国的春节从农历新年开始,持续十五天。(定语从句)
It begins at the beginning of the lunar New Year, which lasts for 15 days.
3.节日前,我和父母一起把房子从上到下打扫干净。
Before the festival, my parents and I cleaned the house from top to bottom.
4.我们购买礼物、装饰材料、食物和衣服。
We bought presents, decoration materials, food and clothing.
5.我们在家门口贴春联。
We put up the Spring Festival couplets on the front gate of our house.
6.节日期间,我们都穿着新衣服聚在一起享受着美食和家庭的温馨。
During the festival, wearing new clothes, we got together, enjoying the delicious food and the warmth of the family.
第三步:合理过渡 完美卷面(注意利用恰当的衔接过渡词汇)
范文
We had an unforgettable Spring Festival. It begins at the beginning of the lunar New Year, which lasts for 15 days.
Before t