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应用文写作对对碰(七)　写人记叙文记事记叙文 一、“写人记叙文”写作增分指导 　[写作题目] (2023·全国甲卷改编)你们学校正举办主题为 “用英文讲中国故事” 的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1．人物简介及事迹；　2.意义或启示。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 The Historical Figure in China 　 　 　 　　　[悟满分作文·厚写作功底] The Historical Figure in China Among the Chinese historical figures that are widely acknowledged, Fan Zhongyan is the most influential in my opinion. Here are the reasons. Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society. He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous. Besides, he proposed the establishment of a national school system, which had a far-reaching influence on the Chinese educational system. What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life：“Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land, the last to enjoy universal happiness.” Fan Zhongyan is such a role model that he always encourages me to be a man of noble character. 学亮点写法 1．学亮丽开头 作者在本文首段开门见山，直奔主题：引出对自己最有影响力的历史人物——范仲淹。 2．学高级表达 (1)使用高级词汇和词块，如：be widely acknowledged, influential, known as, be highly appreciated, made great contributions to, spare no effort等。 (2)准确运用高级句式，如：定语从句that are widely acknowledged, which had a far-reaching ...；倒装句 Here are ... ；状语从句such ... that he always encourages me ... ；主语从句What impresses me most ...；非谓语动词短语作宾补encourages me to be ...等。 3．学精彩结尾 结尾巧妙引用大家熟知的范仲淹的人生哲学“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”来表明该历史人物对自己的人生启示，说服力强，很容易引起读者的共鸣。 4．学行文逻辑 本文首段中 Here are the reasons.有承上启下的作用。第二段的首句为本段的主旨概括句，Besides 进一步对范仲淹做出的重大贡献进行列举。尾段第一句起到承上启下的作用。总之，本文思路严谨，句与句之间、段落与段落之间合理衔接过渡，全文连贯流畅，传达意义完整且具有启迪性。 [积写作素材·造吸睛亮点] Ⅰ.开头部分：引出所要介绍的人物并简要描述 1．The person I admire most is ..., a famous/great scientist known as ... 2．My role model is ..., a(n) outstanding/distinguished/talented scientist titled ... 3．Throughout his/her life, ...demonstrated incredible courage, which allowed him/her to accomplish great things. 4．On the journey of my growth, there are many peo