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第七讲 善总结——8类常考主题的写作思维建模
在“立德树人、以文化人、‘五育’育人”的新高考命题背景下,读后续写的写作主题是有规可寻的。通过研究近几年的高考试题,我们可以发现:高考命题主要围绕“人与自我”“人与社会”“人与自然”三大主题语境,选取考生熟悉的、生活化的情境素材进行命题。为增强备考的针对性、实用性,笔者归纳整理出8类热考话题,供考生考前总结领悟及考前练笔使用。
热考话题一 个人成长
个人成长类话题的读后续写是高考热考话题。 2021年浙江6月高考的读后续写借叙述作者如何支配暑假工作报酬这件事来强调个人成长以及对劳动的认识;2023年新高考Ⅰ卷中的读后续写叙述了一名把英语作为第二语言的学生在老师的鼓励下,克服困难,参加写作比赛并获奖的个人成长故事,说明了兴趣、创造力、意志力在个人成长道路上的重要性。此类话题旨在引导考生理解成长的意义与责任,帮助他们树立坚定的人生目标,形成积极的生活态度。
[思维建模]
(一)谋好篇——续写情节安排
(二)写好句——细节佳句积累
1.Overcome with guilt, she felt her face burning and handed the wallet back to its owner.
她愧疚不已,感到脸上火辣辣的,于是把钱包交还给了它的主人。
2.Learning from my mistakes, I have become more resilient and better equipped to handle challenges that come my way.
从错误中吸取教训,我变得更有韧性,更有能力应对遇到的挑战。
3.It was Mom who taught me that we should never take for granted the very things that most deserve our gratitude.
是妈妈教会我,我们应当永远不要认为那些最值得我们感激的事情是理所当然的。
4.When he was asked why he did it, he simply replied, “Because it was the right thing to do.” From this example, he learned what true courage was: Never be afraid to do good but always fear to do evil.
当有人问他为什么要这样做时,他只是回答说:“因为这样做是对的。”从这个例子中,他懂得了什么是真正的勇气:永远不要害怕做好事,但时刻要当心别做坏事。
5.Each man is the architect of his own fate.
每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。
6.Don't always complain about people.Try to look on the bright side.
不要总是抱怨别人,要尽量往好的方面看。
[考前练笔]
(2023·烟台二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Oh, no!” Jack shouted while looking at the likes and comments on his recent video.
“Why aren't people reacting to my content as they used to?”
Jack was a 19-year-old strong and muscular man addicted to the gym. He loved recording exercise videos and posting them on his account. Initially, his video logs were popular, but his posts' reach soon decreased.
Jack wondered why people had stopped sharing and liking his videos.“Maybe my audience is tired of watching me work out in the gym,” he thought, determined to change the location of his videos.
The following day, Jack went to the neighborhood park and began filming while walking on the track.“Hi, gu