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话题7 经历与感受(10年12考)
写作指导 经历与感受(10年4考)
河南英语KB
英语
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话题概述
分析河南近10年中招真题可知,此话题考查过4次,也是全国中考高频写作话题。其常见的考查角度如下:1. 自己的经历与感受; 2. 他人的经历对自己产生的影响。
※该话题写作佳句及范文积累见《晨读词句篇》P72。
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典例剖析
假定你曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到了家人的表扬。请以“Once I was praised”为题,并根据以下写作要求,用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。
写作要求:1)你做了一件什么样的事情;
2)事情的经过是什么;
3)你有什么样的感想;
4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
5)词数100左右。
参考词汇:pocket money零花钱; meaningful有意义的
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Once I was praised
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【审题指导】
1.定主题:__________________________________
2.定文体:________
3.定人称:___________________
4.定时态: ____________
用零花钱做好事受到家人表扬的经历
记叙文
第一人称&第三人称
一般过去时
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【写作框架】
Once I was praised
开
头 要点1:你做了一件什么样的事情
事件:pocket money, help others, meaningful...
句型:①I did a thing that... ②I did something...with my pocket
money. ③I helped others...by...
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Once I was praised
中
间 要点2:事情的经过是什么
经过:learn about, some students want to learn knowledge, don't
have enough money, hear of, help them, praise...
句型:①I learned about that..., so I... ②I heard of... ③In order
to..., I... ④When I heard of..., I'm..., and I...
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续表
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Once I was praised
结
尾 要点3:你有什么样的感想
感想:feel, glad, happy, satisfied, proud, be willing to do, continue
to help others...
句型:①I feel/think… is… ②I am feeling great... and decide to…
③I'm very... and I'll continue to… ④In my opinion, …is… ⑤This is the lesson I have learned from life—… ⑥Through…, I learn that…
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