专题五 第2讲 “提出建议”主题写作（Word教参）-【创新方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试（老教材）

第2讲　“提出建议”主题写作 试一试——查找失分短板 [题目] (2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1．说明问题； 2．提出建议。 [自主写作] Dear Ryan， I'm Li Hua from Class 3.　 　 　 　 　 　 Yours sincerely， Li Hua 醒一醒——常见失分探因 1．向老师提建议的方式不恰当 有些考生过分关注文章首段的简洁明了、开门见山，忽略了向老师提出建议时应采用委婉表达。请从以下两种开头方式中选择较恰当的一个。 ①I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.(　 ) ②We're overwhelmed with excitement at having an oral English class. But learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice, I feel an urge to express my different voice, hoping that would help.(√) 2．分析问题与提出建议时没有说服力 部分考生在分析随机分组带来的问题时，容易站在宏观的角度进行宽泛的分析，所以会感到无话可说，写出的内容大多为随意性较强的空洞语言。 写本篇作文时，应多联系自身实际，从微角度找切入口，如①与不熟悉的同学搭档练习口语会不好意思开口；②英语水平差距大的同学分在一组会造成沟通不协调……找准这些写作微点才能做到下笔成章、有理有据。 记一记——常用写作范式 Dear ________， 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ____________ (引出建议的主题)．Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to ______________ (建议一). In that way, ______________________ (采取建议一的好处)．You can also ______________ (建议二，根据需要选用不同的句式提出建议)．This would allow you to have the opportunity to __________ (建议二所带来的好的结果)．In addition, __________ (其他的补充或建议)．I'm sure ______ (预测可能的好的结果，给对方以信心和决心)． I hope you ________________ (表达愿望). I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 背一背——高分靓点表达 　[开头常用语] ①I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ... ②I'm very glad to receive your letter and it's a pleasure to tell you something about ... ③You asked me for my advice on ...and I will try to make some suggestions. ④Tha