内容正文:
专题五
书面表达
第2课时
体裁类比突破(2)
告知信VS邀请信
一、“告知信”写作增分指导
[写作题目]
(2)准确运用高级句式,如:省略结构As expected:
(2020·撕江7月高考改编)假定你是李华,你
省略关系词的定语从句you directed:强调句结构
校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假,请给他
It was you who,.·,充分表达了对老师的感激
写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
之情。
1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息:
3.学精彩结尾
3.表达祝愿。
在文章的结尾,作者用wish开头的祈使句结尾,
注意:1.词数100左右:
呼应第一段,再次祝愿老师早日康复,感情真挚,
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
符合写作背景。
[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]
4.学情感表达
!
本邮件第二段作者通过分享班级最新消息来表达
Dear Peter.
We're very sorry to hear that you asked for
对老师的感激之情,与第一段和尾段表达对老师
sick leave and returned to Ireland the other day.
的关心与想念之情融为一体,邮件全文充满了浓
Have you been getting much better now?We all
浓师生情,行文流畅。
miss you very much and hope you will recover
[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]
soon.Here is some good news for you.
As expected.we won the first place in our
I,开头部分:简要说明写信目的
school art festival yesterday.The drama you
1.Learning that you want/desire/would like to...,
directed got a big hand.It was well reviewed by
I'm writing to inform you of/get you informed of
judges because of its perfect plots as well as our
relevant information/I'm writing to let you know
wonderful performance.We owed our success to
that...
your kind and patient guidance.It was you who
2.Delighted/Thrilled to learn that you are planning
to....I'd like to briefly introduce...to you.
should walk onto the stage and receive the
award.
3.As for your last letter asking/requiring
Wish you a full recovery soon and look
about...,I am delighted to tell you something
forward to seeing you again.
in details.
Yours.
4.News reaches me that you are willing to...,and
Li Hua
I can hardly wait to keep you informed of the
学亮点写法
following details.
1,学亮丽开头
Ⅱ,主体部分:详细介绍告知内容
开头使用We're very sorry to hear that..很自然地
1.Meant/Designed to ...various activities are
引出老师生病这一背景,接下来用一个疑问句和一
organized regularly.
个陈述句表达了对老师的关心、想念和祝福,体现:
2.To help out people in need as well as enrich our
了邮件中语言的交流互动感。其中,现在完成进行
school life,the club organizes various/diverse
时have been doing结构运用得非常准确。
voluntary activities.
2.学高级表达
3.Aimed at raising our awareness of serving the
(1)使用高级词块,如:ask