08 Unit1 书面表达10篇 - 2023-2024学年英语八年级下册单元冲刺满分题型训练（人教版新目标）

Unit1 书面表达10篇 1．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下： 1.经常做户外活动； 2.很少用电子产品； 3.坚持做眼保健操； 4. ...... 注意:1.词数80-100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life. At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy. I hope you’ll find my ways helpful. Yours, 【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友Mike写信，给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称来叙述，内容应包括：首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体，可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文按内容表达的需