Unit 3 Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇描写今昔对比的文章-【金版新学案】2023-2024学年新教材高二英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义教师用书（外研版2019）

Section Ⅳ　Writing——写一篇描写今昔对比的文章 [文体感知] 描写今昔变化时要根据过去的情况和现在的事实组织材料。这类应用文写作的一般写作格式为： 1．开头提出主题句(提出什么事情发生了变化) 2．对过去情况的描述(用过去时态，主要是一般过去时) 3．对现在情况的描述(用现在时态，主要是一般现在时) 4．总结句 [增分佳句] 夺人眼球开头句 1．Dramatic changes have already taken place in... 2．With the development of science and technology，smart homes are coming to us. 3．Nowadays，more and more people prefer to...rather than... 4．It is expected/estimated that...won’t be around in our life. 5．There is no doubt that...will take the place of... 亮点出彩篇中句 1．There are many factors that have resulted in...of which the following three are the most important. 2．The reason why...is that... 3．Firstly...Besides/What’s more... 4．As we can see，it’s more convenient to...than to... 5．Most people would rather...than... 韵味无穷结尾句 1．We are all enjoying the convenience of...which makes us proud of the prosperous age. 2．...is surely a thing of the past./I’m sure...is a thing of the past. 3．I believe that the more...the more... 4．Thanks to the...，our life is more colourful and interesting. 5．But for now，maybe it’s best that we just enjoy using them. [典题示例] 假定你是某中学的学生李华，最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你们学校，听说你们学校现在变化很大，希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出。 三年前 一座教学楼，一个操场，学生1 000人 现在 1.校园扩建：新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆，教学楼内有音乐室、计算机教学室等； 2．学生人数：增加到了2 000人； 3．体育设施配备齐全。 参考词汇：体育设施sports facilities Dear Joy， I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something about the changes in our school. Yours， Li Hua 学生用书↓第68页 第一步　审题谋篇 第二步　词汇推敲 1．take place