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如何选用读后续写高级词汇
新高考英语读后续写零基础高分教程
选词的重要性
读后续写的评分标准第七档中明确指出“所使用词汇的准确性、恰当性和多样性”。第二档中指出“所使用的词汇非常有限,语法结构单调,错误极多,严重影响理解”。由此可见,续写中要想获得高分,则需恰当使用丰富多样的词汇,使得文章更加生动、描述跟家栩栩如生。
选词四大原则
1.词汇具体化原则
2.词汇新颖性原则
3. 短语优先原则
4.避免重复性原则
选词四大原则
1.词汇具体化原则:具体化的表达比泛泛而谈的词汇更能引起读者的共鸣。
例如:当描述因果人时, nice,good(好的)会让人觉得空洞,而具体词汇如,kind-hearted(心地善良的), generous(慷慨大方的),easy-going(随和的)等则生动、形象。
示例1:One night, a thief walked into his house.
译文:一天晚上,一个小偷走进了他家。
升级:One night, a thief tiptoed into his house.
译文:一天晚上,一个小偷蹑手蹑脚地走进了他家。
示例2 : He cried when it was time for us to leave.
译文:当我们要离开时,他哭了。
升级: He wept bitterly when it was time for us to leave.
译文:当我们要离开时,他痛哭起来。
1.词汇具体化原则
选词四大原则
2.词汇新颖性原则:将一些普通平淡、常见的高频词转化为复杂
新颖的低频词,即高级词汇。能为文章起到画龙点睛的作用,会
给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。
例如:give--offer/provide;
important--vital重要的;
help me----do me a favor帮我一个忙;
示例1:We had no choice but to leave without them.
译文:我们除了独自离开别无选择。
升级:We had no alternative/option but to leave without them.
示例2 :I should be free any time after school next week.
译文:下周放学后我随时都有空。
升级: I should be available any time after school next week.
2.词汇新颖性原则
选词四大原则
3.短语优先原则:使用相同意义或相近意义的短语来代替单词,可以增加文采,起到优化表达的效果。
例如:important--of great significance;
find the idea--come up with the idea;
understand--get the hang of;
cry--burst into tears;
示例1: They have dicided to leave for Shanghai.
译文:他们已经决定去上海了。
升级: They have made up their minds to leave for Shanghai.
示例2 :The final exam of this term is coming.
译文:期末考试就要到了。
升级: The final exam of this term is around the corner.
3. 短语优先原则
选词四大原则
4.避免重复性原则:尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词,可以选择使用其它同义词、近义词或者派生新词来丰富词汇。
例如:build againi--rebuild重建;
write again--rewrite重写;
tell ahead of time--foretell预言;
示例1: I pay more attention to the study.
译文:我更注意研究。
升级: More attention is paid to the study.
示例2 :If it is convenient for you, let’s meet at 6:00 . If it is not convenient for you, let me know what time suits you best.
译文:如果方便就6点见。如果不方便,告诉我你最合适的时间。
升级: If it is convenient for you, let