内容正文:
虚拟语气与独立主格
在高考作文中的应用
给高考作文一个高分的理由:高考英语书面表达中, 一篇优秀作文,除了要点齐全、语言规范准确、内容连贯、行文流畅以外,还必须在运用较为复杂结构和较高级词汇上有所表现。
所以,在整篇文章中,有意识地灵活运用复杂句式和高级词汇, 不仅显示出自己扎实的英语功底,而且为文章增添亮点,给人一种含金量高的审美享受,也就等于给了阅卷老师一个打高分的理由。
在掌握运用英语基本写作句型基础上,学会使用一些高级句子的表达。句式多变、复杂得体,避免句式单一、缺乏生气,使得文章有声有色,让人耳目一新,成为得高分的亮点。
必要性
一、单句写作
1. 如果我是你,我就会提前对唐朝有些学习和了解。
2. 如果我之前养成了背诵的好习惯,那我可能就会在英语学习方面取得更大的进步。
If I were you, I would study and get some knowledge of Tang Dynasty in advance.
If I had formed a good habit of reciting something, I would have made much more progress in the English study.
3. 如果你能给我提供一些如何更好的利用时间的建议,我将非常感激。
4. 要是没有你的帮助,我上周就无法上交论文了。
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice on how to make better use of time.
But for your help, I couldn't have handed in my paper on time last week.
5. 事实上,我多么希望自己以前在课上能经常提出问题啊。
6. 我建议你和一些中国学生交朋友,他们会帮助你学习普通话(Mandarin)。
In fact/ Actually, how I wish I had often raised questions in class.
I suggest/ advise that you should make friends with some Chinese students, who can help you learn Mandarin.
7. 是我们下定决心该努力学习的时候了。
8. 要是我们大家都投入到环境保护中就好了。
If only everybody devoted themselves to protecting the environment.
It's high time that we made/ should make up our minds to study hard.
10. 因为要参加一个重要的会议,所以我没办法去机场接你。
9. 时间允许的话,我们还可以去东湖划船,欣赏秀丽的湖光山色。
Time permitting, we can also go boating on the East Lake, which provides us with a good opportunity to admire the eye-catching scenery of the watery area.
There being an important meeting to attend, I cannot spare the time to pick you up at the airport.
二、篇章写作
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 解释原因;
3. 另约时间。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 可适当增加细节。
Analyze the writing task.
Organize it.
Draft.
Revise/ Edit.
Dear Tom,
I regret to tell you that I can’t travel to Beijing together with you at the appointed time. I’ve caught a terrible cold after I swam in the East Lake yesterday.
This morning I had a headache. After taking my temperature, my mother found that I had a high