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热考话题二 人间亲情
[情节构思]
步骤一:冲突构造(误会、犯错等)
只有冲突才能体会亲情的珍贵。冲突原因大致有:疏于陪伴、理念不合(代沟)、误会等
步骤二:冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)
步骤三:亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)
[增分技巧]
两段首句定一框 二框二首正能量
1.两段首句定一框:即根据第一段首句关键信息与第二段首句关键信息确定续写部分第一段的续写框架,同时注意情节发展合情合理;
2.二框二首正能量:即用第二段首句关键信息推测第二段情节和情感发展,并结合正能量结尾的续写原则确定第二段的续写框架。
[典例示范]
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge.They had watched their mother in the kitchen.There was nothing to it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 a.m.The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen.They decided to boil the porridge first.They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast.Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk.Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread.This time,she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake.The next minute,the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.But the stove was a mess now.Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.Then she caught the smell of burning.Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Paragraph 1:
As the twins looked around them in disappoint