读后续写高分句式系列（一）课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

How to make your writing vivid 读后续写三大高分句型 How to divide the action into small parts(slow motions) 句式一: S + V1 , V2 and V3 比如“打车去火车站”这个动作 = 拦车 + 上车 + 告诉目的地 He _ a taxi, _ in with his suitcase and _ the driver, “ Go to the railway station,please.” 中英文区别:中文中可以出现一系列动词,英文中不允许,所以英文写作非常依赖连词。 stopped jumped told 句式一: S + V1 , V2 and V3 “把肉扔给狼” = 拿出 +瞄准 + 扔 He _ the meat, _ the wolf and _ it straight to the wolf. took out aimed at threw He glanced at the cup, _ and said, “Thanks.” =先看一眼奖杯,深吸一口气,说道:“谢谢!”。 took a deep breath 句式一: S + V1 , V2 and V3 男孩们跳入湖中嬉戏。 =冲向湖边 + 脱掉衣服 + 跳入水中 The boys _ excitedly to the lake, _ their clothes and _ into the water. rushed took off jumped 句式一: S + V1 , V2 and V3 这个歌手唱歌。 =扫视观众 + 深吸一口气 + 开始演唱 The singer _ the audience, took a deep breath and _. glanced at began to sing 句式一: S + V1 , V2 and V3 仿写: 主+V1, V2, and V3.... 在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容 点击此处添加标题 在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容在此处添加内容 点击此处添加标题 1.她登上(board)飞机,坐在座位上,寻找她的书。 2.女孩停止了啜泣(sob),从女人身边退了(step back)回来,开始唱歌。 _ _ The girl stopped sobbing, stepped back from the woman and began to sing. She boarded the plane, sat on her seat and then looked for her book. 句式二: S + V1 and V2,+doing/done 例:我难过地挂断电话。 = 放下电话 + 坐下 , 全身发抖/哭泣 I put down the telephone and sat down, shaking/sobbing. =抬起头 + 举起双臂 , 大喊“我可以做到!” He held up his head and raised his arms, _ loudly, “ I can do it!” 句式二: S + V1 and V2,+doing/done 或 doing/done, S+V1 and V2 yelling 他从墙头往外看。 她递给我一张纸巾。 = 把梯子靠墙放好, 他爬上去 + 往外看。 = 看到我哭, 她抽出纸巾 + 递给我。 _the ladder against the wall, he climbed and looked out. Seeing me crying louder and louder, she silently pulled out of a piece of napkin and _ it to me. non-verb(doing/done作状语),S + V 句式二: S + V1 and V2,+doing/done 或 doing/done, S+V1 and V2 Putting handed 受到老师的责备,她感到相当的难过,开始哭起来。 non-verb(doing/done作状语),S + V _ by his teacher, he felt rather upset and _. 句式二: S + V1 and V2,+doing/done 或 doing/done, S+V1 and V2 Blamed burst into tears 仿写: doing/done(分词作状语),