读后续写之高分长难句课件-2024届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写 高分长难句 “ ” 环境 动作 情感 At the same time, the wolf also noticed them and turned its head back, howling angrily towards Paul and Becky. Seeing the wolf running towards the car, Paul opened the door without any hesitation, pulling Mac into the car. Of course, Arthur, still running on the Park Avenue, with the suitcase in his hand, refused to stop, trying his best to look for a taxi. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. 时间/地点/过渡, sb, with sth in one’s hand, doind B, did A, doind C, feeling/looking... 环境 动作 情感 动作少怎么办 来不及解释快上车 拦车 hail a taxi 上车 get into it 告诉司机目的地 tell the driver the destination He hailed a taxi, got into it and told the driver the destination. Hailing a taxi, he got into it and told the driver the destination. 拆解练习一 技能一：拆动作，让故事更有画面感 层次感 男孩跳入湖中嬉戏 冲向湖边 rush to the lake 脱掉衣服 take off his clothes 跳入水中 jump into the water The boy rushed to the lake, took off his clothes and jumped into the water. Having taken off his clothes, the boy rushed to the lake and jumped into the water. 拆解练习二 地铁老人玩手机 坐在地铁上 sit on the subway 盯着手机 stare at his phone 皱着眉头 knit his brows/frown Sitting on the subway, the old man stared at his phone, knitting his brows. Absorbed in reading, the man sat till on the subway, frowning. 拆解练习三 Sb did A, B did B and did C. Sb did A, doing B and doind C. Doing B and C, sb did A. (先/因)Having done A, sb did B and C(后/果). Sb did A and B, doing C(果). After/Before doing A, sb did B to do C(目的). 流畅三连 同时发生 有先有后,有因有果 动作多怎么办 《我去救公主》 带上最好的剑 翻过最高的山 闯入最深的森林 救下美丽的公主 我要带上最好的剑 翻过最高的山 闯入最深的森林 把公主带回来 I climbed over the highest mountain, found my way into the deep forest and brought back the princess. 流畅三连 Carrying the best sword,I went into the deep forest and brought the princess back. 同时发生 I climbed over the highest mountain and found my way into the dense forest, bringing back the princess. After climbing over the highest mountain, I found my way in the d