专题五 写作主题四 活动邀请（课件PPT）-【创新方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试（新教材）

写作主题四　活动邀请 试一试——查找失分短板 (2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1．节目介绍； 2．访谈的时间和话题。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 [题目] Dear Caroline， ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely， Li Hua 醒一醒——常见失分探因 1．开头不够简洁明了 本邀请信的开头应开门见山介绍李华，并简单说明写信的目的。部分考生常常会介绍或说明的过于详细，出现无效语言，干扰了行文逻辑，如： I am Li Hua in charge of the English program “Talk and Talk” at our school broadcasting station. Our school broadcasting station is well received among the students, enriching our school life. I'm writing to invite you to attend our program. 找出上面语段中的无效语言： ____________________________________________________ _______________________________ students, enriching our school life. Our school broadcasting station is well received among the 2．时间表述存在误差 ①出现语法错误：如at 9 am on the next Sunday (当时间名词前有this, that, last, next, every, each等词修饰时，其前通常不用任何介词)。 写出上面时间短语的正确表达：______________________ ②表达方式不恰当：出于礼貌，邀请人需要与被邀请人协商一下时间是否方便，有些考生可能会忽略这一点，往往采用过于直白或命令式邀请，如： at 9 am the next Sunday Remember to attend our program then and you are welcome. (看上去很委婉，其实直接单方固定了邀约的时间，不属于礼貌交际。) 尝试委婉表达：Would you tell me if you are available then? ________________________________. 3．要点陈述过于宽泛 本文的要点包含节目介绍与访谈话题，节目的内容介绍可以宽泛一些，但访谈的话题要具体，并且要具有可操作性。如： 宽泛表达：You are expected to talk about something you are interested in. If not, we can arrange another time 具体表达：You are expected to talk about how to improve the Chinese students' communication skills in English. 记一记——常用写作范式 Dear ________， Knowing that you're interested in/fond of/keen on ________________ (感兴趣或喜欢的事物), I'm writing/I'd like to invite you to join in ________________ (活动)． As scheduled, it will be held ______________ (具体地点、时间), when there will be ____________________ (主要内容). Furthermore/In addition, ________________ (进一步的安排), after which we will ________________ (另一个安排). I'm sure/certain/convinced you ca