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写作主题九 活动通知
试一试——查找失分短板
[题目]
(2018·全国卷Ⅱ改编)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展;
2.放映时间、地点;
3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
NOTICE
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Students' Union
醒一醒——常见失分探因
1.语言风格不恰当
有些考生在写作时习惯运用较多具有感情色彩的语言,这与通知类文体不匹配。通知类应用文语言需要简洁明了,表述客观且符合实际,把事情告知清楚即可。
2.时态、语态错误
通知类文体内容以一般将来时和一般现在时为主,根据具体情况也有可能出现一般过去时、现在完成时等时态。此外,该文体的语言表达多用被动语态突出主题。
3.时间、地点错乱
时间和地点在句子中的顺序是一些考生的迷茫点。一般情况下,为避免繁琐或内容分散,活动的时间和地点通常在同一句子中出现,即一句表述完,如:The movie will be shown in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th.
记一记——常用写作范式
Notice
In order to ______________ (目的), ________ (活动) will be held ______________ (时间、地点).
Each class is encouraged ________________ (详情1). Those who would like to ______________ are supposed to ________________ (详情2).
All the students of our school ____________________ (补充说明或详情3). For any question, please/Remember to ________________ (留下联系方式或注明截止日期).
Looking forward to your active participation. (期待参与)
Students' Union
背一背——高分靓点表达
[开头常用语]
①To help you ..., the ...will organize ...
②With the aim of ..., our school is going to hold an activity ...
③School English Drama Club is selecting ...
④The selection will take place at ...on ...
⑤As scheduled, the competition is to be held on ...
[主体常用语]
①Sb.will give a lecture/talk/speech on ...
②There will be a lecture on ...given by ...on/at ...
③We will meet at ...at ... this morning.
④Everyone is required to ...and ...
⑤Firstly, he or she should ...
⑥All the students are kindly asked to ...
[结尾常用语]
①Please be there on time and don't be late.
②For any question, call ...at ...
③Whoever wants to go, please sign your name here as soon as possible.
④In case of any change, you will be kept informed ahead of time.
⑤Remember to .../Bear in mind that ...
⑥If you're fond of the activity, please sign up with ...
悟一悟——高