专题五 写作主题二 活动报道（课件PPT）-【创新方案】2024年高考英语二轮复习专题辅导与测试（新教材）

写作主题二　活动报道 [题目] 试一试——查找失分短板 (2023·浙江1月高考)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1．活动的过程； 2．收获与感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2．请按如下格式作答。 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 醒一醒——常见失分探因 1．对活动过程的介绍不够具体或违背事实 有些考生在写作时，思维往往聚焦于词汇或句式的表达，顺势思维写出一些空洞、不切实际的内容，忽略了写作内容与真实生活的密切联系，违背了应用文的初衷。如：In the activity, we were exposed to thousands of plants, some of which we were unfamiliar with ...结合标题，thousands of表述不切实际，应改为varieties of。 事实上， “认识我们身边的植物”这一活动应该是组织有序、有目的、有意义的教育教学活动。考生应该从科学的角度去描述这次活动，如：In the morning, an expert delivered a lecture, introducing ... After that, we ... The highlight of this activity was ..., which ... 2．结尾随意性强 很多考生在写活动介绍类作文时，往往对结尾部分关注不够，出现草草收尾的现象。其实，结尾部分语言虽然需要简短，但一定要对全文进行总结，并凸显此次活动的成功之处，如： 本文结尾可使用 ... a valuable and enriching experience来总结 “认识我们身边的植物” 活动，用 ... sing high praises for ...说明参加者对这次活动评价很高，凸显该活动意义重大。 记一记——常用写作范式 In order to/To ________________ (活动目的), our class/we/I ________________ (活动) ________________ (时间和地点)． Our class/We/I ________________ (描述活动的开始)．After that, ________________ (描述活动的内容和高潮部分)．Finally, ________________ (描述活动的结束)． From this activity, I have learned that not only does it provide ________________， but also ________________ (活动的影响或意义)． 背一背——高分靓点表达 　[开头常用语] ①A campaign ...was launched in our school. ②Last week our school launched a campaign focusing on ... ③In order to encourage the students to ..., our school organized ... ④At the invitation of ..., ...in our school is to ...next week. ⑤With the ...approaching, we're going to participate in a(n) ... 　[主体常用语] ①During ..., the students experienced .../there will be many ... ②They also visited ...and learned about ... ③Additionally, with the ..., we will also ... ④Blessed with a variety of ..., ...is a good place to explore. ⑤First, the theme of the activity is to know more about ... ⑥Last, everyone is called on to ...