内容正文:
作文专练
图表作文
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学校英文报正在开展以“Learning English Beyond the Classroom”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1. 学习活动状况描述;
2. 简单评论;
3. 你的建议。
2022年全国乙卷
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学生英语学习活动调查结果
(人数百分比)
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
读英文书籍 听英文歌曲 看英语电影 浏览英语学习网站 0.18 0.65 0.5 0.12
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阐述背景
描述图表
提出建议
L2-3
A topic being discussed and a survey conducted
Lead-in (e.g., The results are as follows.)
文章类型 对象及文风
背景目的
段落 行数 要点关键词 要点拓展
短文投稿
英语报读者;语言正式 + 客观
就“Learning English Beyond the Classroom”展开讨论和调查
简评图表
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图表作文
What are they called?
bar chart
line graph
pie chart
What are the criteria for a good description of a graph/chart?
Objectivity
Accuracy
Thoroughness
销售额 第一季度 第二季度 第三季度 第四季度 8.2 3.2 1.4 1.2
系列 1 类别 1 类别 2 类别 3 类别 4 4.3 2.5 3.5 4.5 系列 2 类别 1 类别 2 类别 3 类别 4 2.4 4.4 1.8 2.8 系列 3 类别 1 类别 2 类别 3 类别 4 2 2 3 5
系列 1 类别 1 类别 2 类别 3 类别 4 4.3 2.5 3.5 4.5 系列 2 类别 1 类别 2 类别 3 类别 4 2.4 4.4 1.8 2.8 系列 3 类别 1 类别 2 类别 3 类别 4 2 2 3 5
Useful expressions
part1 carry out /conduct a survey on...
part2
From the bar chart/line graph/pie chart, it can be seen that…
According to the statistics/figures/data shown in the bar chart/line graph/pie chart, …
The bar chart/line graph/pie chart (above) shows/indicates/ demonstrates/illustrates that…
As is shown/illustrated/demonstrated in the graph, there are…
The statistics/figures, presented in the bar chart, shows students’ preference for…
Phrases for presenting figures
1) 占……份额
40 percent of the students ....
Students who ... account for/make up/represent/constitute + 百分比
The majority/minority of students ... /
One/A third of the students .../ A/One quarter of ...
2) 倍数的表达
be (almost/nearly/more than) twice/three times as high/long/ fast/popular/large as…
3) 大约
approximately/roughly/more or less
4) 分别
respectively
Sentence patterns for making comparisons
A, B and C account for 10%, 20%, 30% respectively. (从小到大或者从大到小排列)
…, while…
By contrast, …
… However, …
…, followed by…
Compared with..., …
Try to write one or two sentences to present the