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2024届读后续写高分句式
句型1:场景+情绪+面部描写(肢体动作)
Seeing(Hearing/Thinking of...) sb./sth, sb.felt a strong ( an overwhelming )sense of +情绪名词welling up inside sb. and surging through one's body, (with tears of +情绪名词 running down one's cheeks).
看到(听到/想到…)某人/某物,某人感觉一股强烈的...情绪涌上心头并涌遍全身,(....的泪水从某人的脸上流下来了)。
例:Seeing a dark figure approaching, Lily felt a strong sense of fear
welling up inside her and surging through her body, with tears of
hopelessness running down her cheeks.
【注:】最后的with结构还可以换成以下的肢体表达1) with hands+非谓语动词(shaking/waving/sweating/crossed交叉/clenched紧握/2) with legs+非谓语动词(trembling/kicking/frozen静止/rooted to the spot一动不动)3) with eyes+非谓语动词(fixed on.../staring at...盯着/locked on...锁住/looking up and down上下看/burning with fire怒气冲冲/twinkling with pleasure(excitement)闪耀喜悦、兴奋的光芒/wide with horror(surprise)害怕、惊讶睁大眼睛)4) with head+非谓语动词(drooping耷拉着/bent(bowed/lowered)头低着/held up high头抬得高高得/spinning头晕目眩/)5) with face+非谓语动词(turning pale变苍白/burning hot火辣辣的/lit up面露喜色/forcing a smile勉强微笑/growing serious变严肃)
句型1应用实例:
1. 看到他跳入(jump into)水中,我感到一股强烈的希望涌上心头并涌遍全身,激动的泪水从我的脸上留下。
Seeing him jumping into water, I felt a strong sense of hope welling up inside me and surging through my body, with tears of thrill streaming down my cheeks.
2. 听到他因运动员精神而被授予一个奖项,他感到一股强烈的激动之情涌上心头并涌遍全身,眼睛闪耀着喜悦的光芒。
Hearing he was awarded a prize for his sportsmanship, he felt a strong sense of hope welling up inside him and surging through his body, with eyes sparkling with joy.
3. 想到她要一个人在这漆黑的森林度过一个晚上,她感到一股强烈的绝望与无助涌上心头并涌遍全身,脸变得苍白起来。
Thinking she would spend a night alone in this dark forest, she felt a strong sense of despair and hopelessness welling up inside her and surging through her body, with face turning pale.
句型2:“as倒装+拟人修辞”惊艳到爆
2.adj.+adj. as sb/sth. be, sb. still did sth. as if there was an inner voice telling sb.that sb. should do sth.=adj.+adj. as sb. be, sb. still did sth. ,doing sth(非谓语), with an inner voice reminding/encouraging sb. (not) to do sth.尽管既......又......,某人仍然做某事,(做某事)仿佛内心有个声音告诉/提醒/鼓励某人,(不)做某事(“面对