2024届高三英语一轮复习读后续写模拟题 football 课件

读后续写 English Continuation Writing 模拟题football 主讲人: 免费 查看使用说明 考情分析 能基本读懂故事,对原文本分析不够具体到位。 写作情节偏离,逻辑混乱,衔接不恰当,句式简单,描写生硬。 教学目标 通过故事要素分析,引导学生深度解析文本,帮助学生理顺情节发展,抓住人物核心性格,确保学生续写情节符合逻辑。 通过主述位推进帮助学生搭建文章逻辑结构,解决学生无话可写的问题。 通过提供语料,作文互批表,明确批改润色要求,反复练习,指导学生写出更自然合理衔接得当的作文。 文本分析 part1 Which one do you prefer? Why? Maria was practicing with her soccer mates in a tiny school yard. They were all from River Edge Rockers, a soccer team of their community. Suddenly, the ball flew into a deep hole at the edge of the yard. It was the third time that they had lost their ball this month. Without the ball Maria had to wave goodbye to her mates and went home, depressed. “If only there were a regulation soccer field!” she thought. 01 That evening, seeing her low spirits, her father asked, “What was the matter, dear?” “I was just thinking about playing in a brand new soccer field!” Maria answered. Her father smiled and said, “Tomorrow, a Town Council meeting is to be held to discuss about the use of that vacant (空着的) lot next to the pet store, Home for Pets. Why not take this opportunity to convince them we need a better field?” 02 03 04 7 The next day, with the company of her father, Maria and her teammates went to the meeting hall. On their arrival they saw Councilwoman Jill and some citizens already there. They took their seats. After Jill announced the start of the discussion, Maria stood up and spoke first. “Up till now there is no soccer field in our community, which certainly affects our physical health. Our team currently have to practice in a tiny school yard, and only when it’s not already booked.” 05 Mrs. Lorries, owner of the pet store, commented, “I couldn’t agree more. Kids do need such a field.” The Rockers applauded excitedly and the other citizens all agreed it would be a way out. “A soccer field would be a good use for that lot with overgrown weeds and some large rocks, but to build such one would need a small sum of money and maybe you even need to do all the work on your own.”