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类别二做法建议类(10年3考)
此类作文基本上涉及健康与安全、学生学习、保护环境、人际交往,良好的行为规范等方面。安
徽中考在这类作文中一般会给出具体的要点信息。
【时态】一般现在时;一般将来时
【人称】第一人称;第二人称
【衔接词】Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,What's more,Last but not least等
写作框架与模板
习写作框架
开头段
点明主题(针对某事给出建议)
第二部分
做法
建议类
中问段
分点陈述建议irstly.Secondly,Thirdly/Finally)
结尾段
再次点明炫,表达期待
写
刀写作模板
分
Dear
(建议对象),
I'd like to offer some conductive suggestions about
练
(建议事件)for you.
First,it is important to
(建议1),as you can
(理由
1).Then,it also helps to
(理由2).Besides,it should be a good idea to
(建议2),because by doing so
(理由3).We can also
(建议3).n this way,we
(理由4).I'm sure
(预测可能的结果,给对方行动以信心和决心).
Please take good consideration of my proposals.I hope you will find them useful.
Yours sincerely,
(写信人)
写作素材积累
有关健康与安全的建议
回心理健康
)开头句(介绍健康与安全问题及其重要性)】
1.It's normal to have pressure in life and study.
回身体健康
Here is my advice to deal with pressure.
1.As is known to us all,it is very important to
2.Students have been competing with each other
keep healthy.
since they were very young or don't know how to
2.As far as I am concerned,health is the best
get along well with others,which brings them
gift that a man can ever have.
too much pressure.They feel lonely.I'll give
3.After experiencing the pain caused by the ill-
you some ways to relieve pressure.
ness,I realized the value of health
回安全
4.Nowadays,more and more people have known
1.As teenagers,we must learn something about
about the importance of keeping healthy.
how to keep safe.
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写作分类讲练·安微英语
2.The summer holiday is coming.And swimming 2.I hope everyone can be happy and healthy.
safety has become a big problem.
3.Life is important,and we should value it.
。中间句(提出建议)
回心理健康
回身体健康
1.In a word,it's important for us to learn to
1.You'd better eat more fruit and vegetables
relax.If we can deal with pressure properly,we
instead of junk food.
can live a better and more enjoyable life.
2.We need to focus on sleeping habits because
2.In my opinion,pressure is not a bad thing.
they may have a big influence on our study.
Proper stress is beneficial to o