读后续写情绪表达高阶九式（03）无灵主语句 2024届高考英语复习

一、什么是“无灵主语句” 无灵主语句,是指用无生命的事物做主语,用人或社会团体的行为或动作做谓语,因此这类句子常带有拟人化的修辞色彩。 列如: Rome witnessed many great historic events.(在罗马发生过许多重大历史事件) 它的主语Rome罗马,是无生命的事物,但谓语witness目击,是人的动作。这种“无灵主语+有灵谓语”的句式,就是无灵主语句。 在写读后续写文章时,巧妙使用无灵主语句,可以是高语言的生动性和多样性,让阅卷老师眼前一亮。 二、写作素材: 1.A big smile of excitement lit up his face as he heard the good news. 听到这个好消息,他脸上露出兴奋的笑容。 2.Fear slowly crept upon her. 恐惧慢慢向她袭来。 3Fear flooded over/ welled up in her. 恐惧涌上她的心头。 4 When l saw my mother rode on the badly-oiled creaking bike, an upsurge of embarrassment ran through myself. 当我看见母亲骑着那辆破旧得嘎吱作响的自行车过来时,一阵尴尬袭向全身。 5A frown slowly crept on my face. 我慢慢皱起了眉头。 6The harsh words sent him into the depths of guilt. 刻薄的话语把他推进了内疚的深渊。 7.The dark,rainy evening,the howling wind,the thundering/roaring clouds held me entirely in their power; it was the first time in a year and a half that l'd seen the night face to face. 漆黑的夜晚,风雨交加,电闪雷鸣,我全然被这种力量镇住了,这是我一年半以来第一次目睹夜晚。 8.Her words pierced my heart. 她的话刺穿了我的心 9.A wave of despair choked her words. 她绝望地说不出话来。 10.Terror gripped me.恐惧向我袭来。 11.Fear slowly creeps upon her. 恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。 12.A burst of panic washed over me. 一阵恐慌向我袭来。 12.A wave of relief flooded over me. 我如释重负。 三、无灵主语分类 1.情感状态的抽象名词+谓语 “情感状态的抽象名词+谓语动词”的描写有: ①Fear gripped the village. The whole village was enveloped in terror (整个村庄笼罩在恐怖之中) ②Courage deserted him. He lost his courage (他失去了勇气) ③ surge of warmth rose inside me. 一股暖流从心中涌出。 ④Anger choked my words. I was so angry that I couldn't speak (我气的说不出话) ⑤A warm current welled up in my heart and surged through me. 一股暖流从心中升腾,在身上涌动。 ⑥A sudden flicker of a good word thrills every pore and every inch of my skin.突然一闪而过的灵感让我的每一个毛孔和每一寸肌肤都欢欣鼓舞。 ⑦A wave of nervousness washed over him. A wave of tension came over him (一阵紧张的情绪涌上他的心头) ⑧My soul silently rejoiced.我感到一阵窃喜。 常见的情绪名词:happiness, joy, delight 开心快乐;surprise, astonishment 惊奇惊讶;shame 羞耻羞愧;anger 愤怒;despair 绝望;regret 遗憾后悔;sorrow 悲伤;horror 惊恐;anxiety 焦虑;disappointment 失望沮丧;satisfaction 满意满足;puzzlement 困惑不解;等等。 2.身体部位/音容类名词+谓语 ①Smile cr