2024届高考英语读后续写情绪表达高阶九式(02)with结构状语讲义

一总论:with复合结构” 即 “with+宾语+宾语补足语”,依附着句子而存在,起到丰富和充实句子内容的作用,因此,该结构有利于在续写中扩写句子。在读后续写中,“with复合结构” 多用作原因状语或伴随状语,使得叙述的情节更具体;同时,在细节描写上使用该结构能形象、生动地营造画面,使得表达更深刻。掌握好以下关于“with复合结构” 的句型,将有效地助力读后续写。 二:句型精讲精练:(注意:表达的多样性-文无定法!) 句型一:主谓……with+sb/sth+adj. 1. 他这次摔倒了,背部着地,双腿叉开。 第一种表达: He fell over this time, flat on his back with his legs wide. (“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,形容词wide说明his legs的状态, 刻画出人物摔倒后的画面。) 第二种表达: He fell this time, landing on his back with his legs spread wide. 2.他的妻子躺在床上,脸色苍白。 第一种表达: His wife lay in bed with her face pale. (“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,形容词pale说明herface的状况,刻画出妻子虚弱的神态。) 第二种表达: His wife was lying in bed, her face pale. 2. 买完所有东西,她高兴地回家。 第一种表达: With all the things bought, she headed for home joyfully. (“with复合结构”在句中作原因状语,用来推动情节发展,things与buy之间是被动关系,故该处用过去分词bought。) 第二种表达: After buying everything, she went home happily 句型二:主谓……with+sb/sth+介词短语 1. 他用喷雾向狼喷过去,其中一只手扶着栏杆。 表达①: He fired the spray at the wolf with one hand on the bars. (“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,介词短语on the bars说明one hand的放置之处, 以此来描写人物此时谨慎的动作。) 表达②:He sprays the Wolf with one hand on the railing. 2. 一到家门前,他惊讶地发一只小狗正好奇地看着他,它脸上带着震惊的表情 表达①: Upon arriving at the door of his home, he was surprised to discover that a little dog was watching him curiously with the expression of shock on its face. 。(“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,介词短语on its face说明the expression of shock,以此来刻画小狗的神态。) 表达②:As soon as he got home, he was surprised to find a little dog looking at him curiously with a shocked expression on his face 句型三:主谓……with+sb/sth+doing;With+ sb/sth+doing,主谓…… 1. 马蜿蜒穿过人烟稀少的松林,而我继续环视寻找熟悉的地标。 表达①: The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me continuing to scan the horizon for a familiar landmark. (“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,用来描写“我”此时的行为, continue…与me之间是主动关系, 故用现在分词形式。) 表达②:The horse meandered through the sparsely populated pine forest, while I continued to look around for familiar landmarks. 2. 眼泪顺着他的脸颊流下,他回答说:“我尝试过了。我真的试过了。” 表达①: With tears streaming down his cheek, he replied, “ I did try. I really tried.” (“with复合结构”在句中作伴随状语,用来刻画人物的表情,strea