内容正文:
T8联考应用文
假定你是李华,在外教课期末考试中发现有人作弊,你认为这会影响考试公平。请你给外教John写--封邮件,内容包括:1.情况描述; 2.你的看法; 3.你的请求。
思路
首段: 描述情况中段:看法+请求 尾段:感谢
例文1+解析
Dear John,
Disappointing as the news is, I regard it as a necessity to be honest with you. Someone cheated in the final exam by using electronic device. (不同于以非谓结构表达背景+目的的写法,换种方式写首段,使用倒装句式)
From my perspective, such behavior severely affects the fairness of exam which should be maintained by every student. What’s more, no one would deny the fact that honesty is the primary requirement for everyone attending an exam. Therefore, what I suggest is to exert relevant punishment as a warning to others so as to prevent the occurrence of similar cases in the future exams. (看法:影响公平,这是题目已给的,可以再补充一点,例如诚实是考试的基本要求,使用定从 同从;接着利用主从来写请求,也可以理解为建议)
Your attention on this issue and consideration of my suggestion would be sincerely appreciated.(最后感谢 使用被动)
Yours,
Li Hua
默写版:
Dear John,
______________________________________________尽管这消息令人失望,但我认为有必要对你说实话. Someone cheated in the final exam by using electronic device.
__________________________________________________________在我看来,这种行为严重影响了每个学生都应该维护的考试公平性. What’s more, no one would deny the fact that honesty is the primary requirement for everyone attending an exam.______________________________________因此,我建议采取相关惩罚措施,以警告他人,防止在未来的考试中发生类似情况 .
Your attention on this issue and consideration of my suggestion would be sincerely appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文2
Dear John,
I hope this email finds you well. I'm Li Hua, one of your students, and I am writing to report an incident of cheating that I witnessed during the final exam.
Regrettably, I noticed several students engage in dishonest behavior during the exam, such as exchanging answers and using electronic devices. In my opinion, these cheating behavior has the potential to impact the overall fairness of the exam. Therefore, I kindly request thatyou look into this matter and reconsider the scores already given.
Thank you for your attention to thi