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人教版高中英语读后续写 情绪描写
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环境描写
情绪描写包括人物的感受、情绪,是读后续写中必不可少的细节描写之一。合理的情绪描写与刻画,可以凸显人物的性格、人际关系的特征,以及烘托故事高潮,进而突出语篇主题等。因此,合理的情绪描写在读后续写中是非常有必要的。
情绪描写的四种方法
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例:Lisa was delighted that you could stay.
你能留下来,丽萨很高兴。
分析:直接用形容词 delighted 表示丽萨开心的心情。
1. 直接利用恰当的表示情感的形容词、副词、名词或介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐
2.利用环境细节“融情于景”烘托人物的情感
例:Della finished her crying and dried her face. She stood by the window and looked out unhappily at a gray cat walking along a gray fence in a gray back yard. (The Gift of the Magi)
德拉停止了哭泣,擦干了脸,她站在窗前,一脸沮丧地看着一只灰猫沿着灰篱笆在灰色的后院里散步。(《麦琪的礼物》)
分析:句中连续 3 次使用了形容词 gray,体现了德拉的难受和不开心。
例:With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
简看不到路,只能走了很长时间。她爬到一个高处后,转过身,希望能看到湖泊。令她惊讶的是,除了森林,她什么都看不到,远处是白雪覆盖的山顶。她突然意识到自己迷路了。
分析:句中 turn around, hoping to see the lake,通过动作描写,说明简满怀期望;To her surprise,利用介词短语体现简的吃惊;she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snow-capped mountain top,寓情于景,体现简的无望和失落。
3.利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪
例 1:“Absolutely!” replied John, excitement shining in his eyes.
约翰答道:“一定!”,他兴奋得两眼放光。
分析:利用名词 excitement 和独立主格结构,描写约翰的兴奋激动。
4. 利用高级句式和修饰成分细化感情细节
例 2:So angry was the bear that it roared and smacked the fence violently.
熊怒火中烧,开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。
分析:利用 so…that 倒装句型,描写熊生气的样子。
情绪描写语料积累
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1. 喜乐
高分词块:
in a good mood 心情很好
be all smiles 喜笑颜开
in cheerful/high spirits 兴高采烈
be tickled pink 非常高兴
roar with laughter 放声大笑
in seventh heaven 极为高兴
sb’s face lights up 喜形于色
beam with pleasure 喜不自胜
1. 喜乐
高分词块:
be as sweet as honey 像蜜一样甜
grin from ear to ear 满面笑容
be wild with joy/delight 欣喜若狂
dance for/with joy 手舞足蹈
on the top of the world 心满意