内容正文:
Unit 1 People around us
单元话题满分范文必背
1.假如你是大卫,你很爱你的妈妈。请你根据提示要点,写一篇英语文章介绍你妈妈。词数60词以上。
提示:
1.黄头发、大眼睛,是个快乐的人;
2.照顾家人;
3.是位医生,每天夜以继日地工作;
4.对你的学习要求严格;
5.经常找时间帮助你的学习。
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【答案】例文:
My mother
Hi, I am David. I love my mother. My mother is a cheerful woman with blond hair and big eyes. She takes care of my family. She is a doctor and she works all day and all night every day. She is friendly to her patients. She is strict about my studies. She often finds time to help me with my studies.
My mother is hard-working, patient and kind. She is a great mother.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山介绍自己很爱妈妈;
第二步,具体介绍妈妈的外貌、职业及帮助自己的学习等方面内容;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②be friendly to对……友好
[高分句型]
①She is a doctor and she works all day and all night every day.(and连接并列句)
2.以“母亲”为题,请写一篇短文,介绍自己的母亲以及母亲和你的故事、感情。词数不少于100字。
提示:文章可以分为三段落进行描述;
第1段,先简单描述母亲的年龄,外形,职业,性格以及特征;
第2段,介绍母亲爱好和能力,对你的照顾或者对家庭的贡献;
第3段,简单表达你对母亲的敬意和爱戴,以及将来希望如何对待母亲以表回报之类的;
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