专题13 读后续写之点睛结尾-【高分·技能】2024届高考英语写作题型全面突破

专题13读后续写之点睛结尾绝招 续写的主题是积极向上的，结尾时通常弘扬一种正能量，起到升华主题的作用。让我们一起来学习以下方法，为我们的续写画龙点睛。 点睛技巧1：首尾呼应式结尾 ①（2017年高考）作者与健忘妈妈一块旅游的故事。 原文： I had an interesting childhood . It was filled with surprise and amusements , all because of my mother -- loving , sweet , yet absent - minded and forgetful . 我有一个有趣的童年，充满了惊喜和娱乐，都是因为我的母亲——有爱，却心不在焉，健忘。 续写：Despite mom ' s being absent - minded and forgetful , she was still a kind and nice mom . 尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。 ② （2020年高考I卷）妈妈带领孩子们一起帮助贫穷的家庭的经历 原文：The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline , some people in the town had lost their jobs . Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet . People were trying to help each other meet the challenges . 麦迪斯一家住在一个小社区。由于经济衰退，镇上的许多人都失业了。许多家庭都在艰难维持生计。人们也在努力帮助彼此迎接这次的挑战。 续写：Bernard’s business worked out quite well . The smile on his face was as brilliant as the sun on a spring day . He also decided to do what he could to help those in need. 伯纳德的生意很顺利。他脸上的笑容就如春日里的阳光那样灿烂。他也决定尽他所能去帮助那些有需要的人。 点睛技巧2：升华主题式结尾 I.助人为乐型升华句式 1.Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith ' s family , but he also did whatever he could to help those in need . 他不仅把麦迪斯家人的帮助记在心里了，而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。 【句式点评】该句运用了固定结构 not only ...but also... 且应用了部分倒装高级句型。 2.It was Mom that made my childhood colorful . And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving . 是妈妈让我的童年多彩绚丽。也是妈妈向我展示了“给与”的真正意义。 【句式点评】应用了强调句的结构 3.From then on, I would go all out to help those in need. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future. 从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力去帮助有需要的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。 4.Small kindness can bring rich reward . 小的善举可以带来丰富的回报。 5.Small act can bring / contribute to / give rise to a big difference . 小小举动，大大影响。 6.A small act / gesture of kindness will perhaps melt / cure one ' s loneliness . 小小的善举，可能会融化/治愈一个人的孤独。 7.The miracle is this : the more we share, the more we have . 这就是奇迹：分享的越多，收获的越多。 8.Love matters more than anything , which can conquer / overcome any difficulty .